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Jasob_Hendrix
eryxc wrote:
extremedragon wrote:

COME ON WHERE IS MY CHARACTER?!?

In the superhero universe that’s going to be out in a few weeks... as well as someone else!

My curiosity has just peaked even higher

alanzo1i1i
JasonGrace2017 wrote:
eryxc wrote:
extremedragon wrote:

COME ON WHERE IS MY CHARACTER?!?

In the superhero universe that’s going to be out in a few weeks... as well as someone else!

My curiosity has just peaked even higher

Exactly.

Hawaiian_King
same
eryxc

Yeah happy.png I have a huge storyline grin.png

alanzo1i1i

Would I post my writing on chess.com? I have a few human understandable stories.

eryxc

Ok make your own forum

eryxc

Or do it here

eryxc

I don’t mind

alanzo1i1i

Eh, I only have one chapter done. I’ll work on it.

eryxc

Sounds good! I have about 3 more done but I will be off Chess.com and off writing for about the next three weeks so if they are off by a day... it’s fine right? grin.png

alanzo1i1i

I’ll jsut post a preiview here:

​The Biography of AbraHAM Lincoln
By Extremedragon 
AbraHAM Lincoln grew up in a small town in Burningham, Alabama, which had just been discovered and named because of the piece of (now roasted) ham that was lying on the ground upon discovery. While working on his parent’s farm, AbraHAM saw a post on the town hall. VOTE FOR ALEXANDER HAMILTON! It wrote. AbraHAM saw small letters on the bottom saying: other candidate needed. Please sign up in the town hall. AbraHAM rushed to the town hall to sign up, and sure enough, he was chosen to be the other candidate. AbraHAM was now facing one of the greatest challenges in his life-Running against Alexander HAMilton.

hitthepin
eryxc wrote:

Yeah  I have a huge storyline

You and me too, sister.

thegreatauk

Chapter 1 Us and Them

HTP sat in the chair waiting. "Where is this interviewer??" He was thinking, He after all was a busy person being CEO of a company. Just then he heard a knock on the door "come in" he said. In stepped the interviewer he seemed very young for the job but polished enough. "Hi" he said.

Now HTP never liked interviews for many reasons they were usually long, boring and interviewers trying to squeeze as much information out of you as possible. But this was an opportunity to get good public reception for the company. Almost coldly HTP replied "Hello, so shall we start?"

 

The interviewer didn't pay any attention to the tone and replied almost to cheerfully "Yes! Where shall we start?"

"Ah yes! So, this is office is where all the "important"  stuff is done?"

Meanwhile HTP had gotten out his chair and beckoned the interviewer out.

As they exited it became apparent that they were in a circular building, looking up he could not see the top, looking down the bottom was also not visible.

As they entered and elevator the interviewer asked "How many floors are there?"

He got the simple reply "More than you could count" "No one knows every single place in here, since it was built no one but the builders know where everything is, and they are deceased"

As they they went down floor after floor the interviewer asked "Running a company as big as this must be a big job! I mean this is the first virtual reality world of it kind. What is the main task for employees"

Just as the elevator stopped HTP answered "quite simple our employees are like the police, keep trolls, hackers and other such horrible people out of the world and keep the forums clean.

 

That's chapter 1!

hitthepin

I like this story! And not just because I'm the one starting it off for a change.

eryxc

yes it is cool! my next story out Saturday

hitthepin

Now we have to incorporate VR in the big crossover, though? Really?

eryxc

all I want in your story auk is be a mod for chess.com lol

eryxc
hitthepin wrote:

Now we have to incorporate VR in the big crossover, though? Really?

seems so

thegreatauk
eryxc wrote:

all I want in your story auk is be a mod for chess.com lol

This could probably happen. In fact that was one of my thoughts.

thegreatauk
hitthepin wrote:

I like this story! And not just because I'm the one starting it off for a change.

Well in my first fan fic which I ditched you were also the starting off charcter so I thought I would keep it like that.