poem 4

hey , this is a poem about the POV of a really naive girl after a bad break up

Ever so Vain

So humble , so friendly,
But I got it all wrong ,
I know it now,
But now you’re gone

I wish I said something ,
About you instead,
Rather than blaming me
For all that was said

I regret being with you ,
Every moment of it ,
You’re a jerk , you’re a lie ,
And that’s something that you can’t defy

“In your face” I wanted to say,
Since I have someone better than you,
Too bad you’re gone ,
I guess your just a flu

I’m done with this talk ,
For now I guess ,
But I’m sure to look at you with disdain
When you come to me and say
“I want to be yours again”

By Phavi

please comment :)

yet another great poem. amazing.

immediate , thanks :)

wow, you write all these like you are the person. It's amazing

maybe I am ;) maybe I'm not

It's a thought, but I doubt it your to nice a person so far.

for nice people its just a thought , for the people who are naive , they say it out loud

interesting thought

:)

It is

aww still mad kiddo?

huh? I was reading twilight , leah's POV to be exact

never been a real big fan of twillight, i rather browse through hellsing

cool

I was reading it , and I found this as a very good emotion to write about , why would I write it about u?

did i ever mention that this was about me?

yes u did , atleast that's what I took from the context

i was taking about the thing you didnt tell about your ex boy friend or something o well you wouldnt tell me anyways :P

its not about my personal life , I take just the emotions  from it (inspiration )and I turn it into something else

12th August 2009, 08:36pm

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by CupcakewithSprinkles
California United States

Member Since: Feb 2009
Member Points: 1987

maybe I am ;) maybe I'm not

usually means you are the erson haha