poem 7

Bliss

Nothing much to say ,
Nothing that I could ever do ,
The light of my life gone forever
I wish , I could just hang myself in a noose

I can’t believe what happened,
I’m a fish without water ,
I’m living , but I’m dead
When I am not with you

All my thoughts around you ,
Every flash back , coming true,
You shouldn’t have left me alone
You should have taken me along with you

Every step , just torture
Every dawn , I can see
Your warmth , my bliss ,
You have taken everything away from me

I continue to exist ,
But I do not know why,
I don’t have my soul in anymore
I have given it to you , as a souvenir as you fly

-Phavi Kannan

comment ^^

lack of soul=bad. LOL. nice one!

haha , thanks ^^

you have exceeded yourself it fits perfect it's great:O i'm amazed! tough i still dont understand 2 things haha

I don’t have my soul in anymore<---??

and whats noose?

sorry i'm just trying to learn

noose , like a rope a person uses to hang him/her

ya basically means spirit , means that his heart is with her ^^ even if she is dead

its beautiful

^^ thanks *hugs

*hugs back* ^^ keep writing em id say your awesome

^^ u r too

you shud geive me a topic for my next poem

fear of change

change like what ? change as in mental change or physical change?

mental

ok , I'll have it tomorrow , ^^

goodluck your poetry keeps getting better so my expectations keep getting higher:P you always exceed them

^^ that means ALOT *hugs

Oh wow.  This is the solution to my insomnia!

I printed this down and will take it to bed tonight.  I bet I'm fast asleep before I get to the 13th line.

:( you're mean

there is no point to making a mean comment to a girl who has made a bigger name for herself then you have you great oaf. It's a good poem ccws, but no noose's please that is a waste even in a metaphor