poem 9

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Gone

Every moment passing, I knew something ,
Something that you wanted to say,
You wanted me to leave ,
you never wanted me to stay,

What kept me there , I still don't know ,
Something missing , just my soul,
Tears run bare , like a river running loose ,
Go away from me , just hang me by the noose

You go , but I didn't want that ,
your supposed to stay , can't you see that ?
Everything wrong ,
everything's wrong with me

Time's are passing ,
but your still thick at heart ,
But now I come back ,
Thing I like these I should never start

Kill me , with a sword or knife,
That I could bare,
But talk to me though,
But you don't ,I just wish I can't care

An ocean deep of love ,
I still have for you ,
But now its gone ,
So have you

by Phavi Kannan

Avatar of RedSoxpawn

that was fast

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you gotta start making a few cheerful poems somewhere, even though these are wonderful. your gonna make me emo, which I hate haha

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I can't sadly :(

Avatar of RedSoxpawn

Think about good times. or you will get tired of this life and end up souless.

Avatar of FIRE_FOR_EFFECT

ur poems r wonderful, but we need to lighten them up. Cry too sad.

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i've got the feeling you cried your heart out girl, how are you?

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I know

Avatar of Gerik

She depicts life as it is. It's just being realistic. And by the way, yet another great poem.

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I know that also

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yes but i know that she cried i can feel it..

Avatar of CupcakewithSprinkles

well I was crying , and now too , and no one can make me stop

Avatar of FIRE_FOR_EFFECT

let it out, we all love u here.

Avatar of RedSoxpawn

if only I could. I will tell you this, you need to lighten up on yourself you are thinking to high in the clouds for the moment. already you have done more then many people ever do, just moving across the pond is enough by itself

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*sigh* i bet some1 can

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yeah, well somebody is not there for her, and they need to be. If I ever find out who put so much sadness into her life, I swear they will meet a sadness that makes hers look like a heaven

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i just wonder what's going on in her life that make sher feel like this..

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It's something deep inside on a level that we can't understand, and probably never will. I almost feel sorry for whomever she goes off in life with, they will have to learn to adapt to this girl and love her for who she really is deep inside not how she is on the top

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i will try to come to an understanding and crack open this girl knowing what is going on in her mind i just want to see if i can do something for her

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I would love to actually do something for her also, but First I have to do the same thing as you