Poem : THE PROMISES NEVER KEPT

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She built me castles of promises,

but each one was made of sand,

they rose with the tide of her words,

and vanished when truth touched the land.

I trusted her whispers like prayers,

each vow was a star in my night,

but stars too can fade without warning,

And leave the sky empty of light.

She swore — I’ll never leave you,

she swore — forever, just us two.

Her eyes were oceans of certainty,

yet they drowned me in waves untrue.

Her promises danced like illusions,

a mirage in the desert of trust,

I followed with hope in my footsteps,

but the pathway dissolved into dust.

Now silence repeats all her echoes,

my heart counts the debts of her lies,

a temple of love stands in ruins,

where devotion was meant to rise. 😊

~Ashmit

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Nice!

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Fsyhy wrote:

Nice!

Thanks

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