So there this poem writing competition in my school , which of these two poems do you think I should enter?
<!-- /* Style Definitions */ p.MsoNormal, li.MsoNormal, div.MsoNormal {mso-style-parent:""; margin:0in; margin-bottom:.0001pt; mso-pagination:widow-orphan; font-size:12.0pt; font-family:"Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";} h1 {mso-style-next:Normal; margin:0in; margin-bottom:.0001pt; text-align:center; mso-pagination:widow-orphan; page-break-after:avoid; mso-outline-level:1; font-size:12.0pt; font-family:"Times New Roman"; mso-font-kerning:0pt; font-weight:normal; font-style:italic;} @page Section1 {size:8.5in 11.0in; margin:1.0in 1.25in 1.0in 1.25in; mso-header-margin:.5in; mso-footer-margin:.5in; mso-paper-source:0;} div.Section1 {page:Section1;} -->
Gone Forever
In the dark, in the cold
I believed in something I couldn’t see
Something small like hope, so bold
In a distant land of dreams
Where everything came true
A shiver is all I could feel come true
The warmth of the sun, gone
The fragrance of the flowers, gone
Nothing except the dark and the cold
All I could see was nothing
The dying rays of the sun
Everything was gone, everything was done
Something was missing
Something I couldn’t lay a finger on
A lifetime, just gone
In the dark, deep ocean blue
Where the fishes roam apart, without a clue
All I could see was a shell, broken apart
Something that sadness couldn’t suffice
Something that happiness couldn’t fill
All I could think is that love is sacrifice
or
<!-- /* Font Definitions */ @font-face {font-family:"Comic Sans MS"; panose-1:3 15 7 2 3 3 2 2 2 4; mso-font-charset:0; mso-generic-font-family:script; mso-font-pitch:variable; mso-font-signature:647 0 0 0 159 0;} /* Style Definitions */ p.MsoNormal, li.MsoNormal, div.MsoNormal {mso-style-parent:""; margin:0in; margin-bottom:.0001pt; mso-pagination:widow-orphan; font-size:12.0pt; font-family:"Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";} h1 {mso-style-next:Normal; margin:0in; margin-bottom:.0001pt; mso-pagination:none; page-break-after:avoid; mso-outline-level:1; mso-layout-grid-align:none; text-autospace:none; font-size:10.0pt; font-family:Arial; mso-font-kerning:0pt;} h2 {mso-style-next:Normal; margin:0in; margin-bottom:.0001pt; text-align:center; mso-pagination:none; page-break-after:avoid; mso-outline-level:2; mso-layout-grid-align:none; text-autospace:none; font-size:16.0pt; font-family:"Comic Sans MS";} @page Section1 {size:8.5in 11.0in; margin:1.0in 1.25in 1.0in 1.25in; mso-header-margin:.5in; mso-footer-margin:.5in; mso-paper-source:0;} div.Section1 {page:Section1;} -->
Forever Denied
In the dark world his corpse lay
He was closing at the bay
The wind comes and the wind goes
Was he forced, no one knows?
His red sword was taken
His heart was broken
The people who he cared for were dead
But most of them were mislead
His sworn enemy was defeated
But his chances succeeded
His life was taken by the person he trusts
Should revenge be must?
In the dark world his corpse lay
He was closing at the bay
His ruby dragon lay dead
His last words were unsaid
Would the truths be revealed?
Would they regret what they concealed?
His life was over, death had come
Would his name be poison to some?
His beloved dead for him by him
Would the sin take him?
He did love her that was for sure
But she did not, she fell for another lure
His heart was broken his life was taken
Only one thing was left unseeken
In the dark world his corpse lay
His body would soon decay
His heart will be in the heart
The trinket is safe beside the cart
Please reply , I seriously need your opinion