Well you asked me to comment on your game, well here it goes.
And just a note...start learning some more openings. What I did when I first started was after every game I played, I went onto 365chess.com and compared my play with the recommended play. I learned where I deviated and why that move was inferior to recommended play. From this I learned the themes and got to know the openings pretty well.
I've played the game before, obviously, but have never really studied the theory of chess until about a month ago when I stumbled upon this site. Since then I've been trying the puzzles (most of which I fail at) and reading the annotated games amoungst heavy-weights. I've decided I've done my homework and it's time to take the test. My chess skills are still closer to a series of accidents than they are a forsought stroke of genious, but after this game (which I actually end up winning) I feel I can at least step into the ring and not embaress myself. I realize I won, and thank you in advance for any congratulations, but the vast majority of my moves I feel are correct or at least good (as I am the person that played them) while I'm certain many mistakes were made. If you could point them out, that would be wonderful.