half analysis: complete my game!

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pedro823


Nilesh021
if this is a current game, you'll have to finish it yourself.
pedro823

dont is. The game goes to here.

man. My friend resigned. But find a way to checkmate!

My way:


Loomis
Anyone who reads this thread will find their rating going down about 100 points.
neneko
Pedro, try to only move the same piece once during the opening, that way you can develop more pieces. Here you move the same bishop 4 times during the first 6 moves of the game and in the end it's back at the starting position. Remember that your goal during the opening should be to activate your pieces and get a good pawn structure, it's way too early to think about attacking anything when you only have one piece developed.
hybridy

I'll add to Neneko's post...

 

Why do you move bishop twice in a row on turns 2 and 3? You can move your bishop 1 time to get to b5.  Your opening gives black 1 free move for no reason at all. And then when you retreat your bishiop later, it takes you two more moves to 'retreat.' You've essentially let black move 3 free pieces without any gain at all on your part. You're lucky black doesn't know how to play.

 

10. Ra3 is a huge blunder on your part. Had your opponent taken your rook with his bishop, you would have probably lost this match. As a general rule, don't ever move your rook out so early. Also try not to move your pawn to A4 unless you absolutely have to (which is never). It ruins your formation and it doesn't help you develope a piece.

 

I hate to say this...but you really only won because your opponent seemed to miss a lot of your blunders. I'd suggest playing a stronger opponent. It'll help you see where your weaknesses are and help you develope a better strategy :P


Lucksen

As it already has been said, try to only move the same piece once in the opening.

I don't think "your" way of checkmating the opponent is a good one. It's not forced.

Also, your grammar hurts my eyes.


Sleeper
Cool Pedro-Rock on
TalFan

Don't be so harsh guys , pedro is obiously a beginner and judging by his ambitious posts he wants improve . Keep at it :)


Dinkydoe
Pedro, you  made my day, keep on posting xD
calvinhobbesliker
so many blunders, who's his opponent?
KillaBeez
I feel like calling this the Brazilian Game of Immortallity
najdorf-inactive

"I afect them defnses."

"afecting my defense, but dont is useful." 

"defensing."

Hilarious.


inrainbows

duhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

that's how I feel after reading this 


AJDONLEY

Pedro823, This game was a blood bathe- well done!! Don't overlook the possibilty of a fork.Wink

 


Dinkydoe
AJDONLEY wrote:

Pedro823, This game was a blood bathe- well done!! Don't overlook the possibilty of a fork.

 


without ofcourse giving away all your pieces to do anything about it:P


x-5058622868
Pedro823, 22. Rc7+ isn't mate. Black has 22. ... Nd7. However, there are now two ways to do a mate in 1. Can you find them?
watchthehit
Don't move the king so many times for no reason :)
tehasian1
this is probably one of the worst games I've ever seen in my life, both of you should be shot
Unbeliever
Pedro, try to comply with basic opening principles, and analyze some master-level games to see what they would do in these situations.