half analysis: complete my game!

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if this is a current game, you'll have to finish it yourself.
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dont is. The game goes to here.

man. My friend resigned. But find a way to checkmate!

My way:


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Anyone who reads this thread will find their rating going down about 100 points.
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Pedro, try to only move the same piece once during the opening, that way you can develop more pieces. Here you move the same bishop 4 times during the first 6 moves of the game and in the end it's back at the starting position. Remember that your goal during the opening should be to activate your pieces and get a good pawn structure, it's way too early to think about attacking anything when you only have one piece developed.
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I'll add to Neneko's post...

 

Why do you move bishop twice in a row on turns 2 and 3? You can move your bishop 1 time to get to b5.  Your opening gives black 1 free move for no reason at all. And then when you retreat your bishiop later, it takes you two more moves to 'retreat.' You've essentially let black move 3 free pieces without any gain at all on your part. You're lucky black doesn't know how to play.

 

10. Ra3 is a huge blunder on your part. Had your opponent taken your rook with his bishop, you would have probably lost this match. As a general rule, don't ever move your rook out so early. Also try not to move your pawn to A4 unless you absolutely have to (which is never). It ruins your formation and it doesn't help you develope a piece.

 

I hate to say this...but you really only won because your opponent seemed to miss a lot of your blunders. I'd suggest playing a stronger opponent. It'll help you see where your weaknesses are and help you develope a better strategy :P


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As it already has been said, try to only move the same piece once in the opening.

I don't think "your" way of checkmating the opponent is a good one. It's not forced.

Also, your grammar hurts my eyes.


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Cool Pedro-Rock on
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Don't be so harsh guys , pedro is obiously a beginner and judging by his ambitious posts he wants improve . Keep at it :)


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Pedro, you  made my day, keep on posting xD
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so many blunders, who's his opponent?
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I feel like calling this the Brazilian Game of Immortallity
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"I afect them defnses."

"afecting my defense, but dont is useful." 

"defensing."

Hilarious.


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duhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

that's how I feel after reading this 


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Pedro823, This game was a blood bathe- well done!! Don't overlook the possibilty of a fork.Wink

 


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AJDONLEY wrote:

Pedro823, This game was a blood bathe- well done!! Don't overlook the possibilty of a fork.

 


without ofcourse giving away all your pieces to do anything about it:P


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Pedro823, 22. Rc7+ isn't mate. Black has 22. ... Nd7. However, there are now two ways to do a mate in 1. Can you find them?
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Don't move the king so many times for no reason :)
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this is probably one of the worst games I've ever seen in my life, both of you should be shot
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Pedro, try to comply with basic opening principles, and analyze some master-level games to see what they would do in these situations.