How's my attack?

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Avatar of davej123
Fresh wrote:

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 That's exactly what I just said.  Thank you for successfully wasting a post to point out what I just pointed out.  I know it only worked because he made a mistake.  That's why I just said that.  So I am asking, what could I have done better?

Don't ask for comment if you don't want it. You said your opponent made a mistake. No, he played badly and made many mistakes.

 


Avatar of karlwig
I think you played this very well, obv. I don't know all the best responses for white but I think you played solid, slowly increasing the pressure. Of course he made a lot of bad blunders that you could explorit, but still, even with the best responses, i don't think he could have done anything... nice game!
Avatar of TalFan
Fresh wrote:

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 That's exactly what I just said.  Thank you for successfully wasting a post to point out what I just pointed out.  I know it only worked because he made a mistake.  That's why I just said that.  So I am asking, what could I have done better?


I think you need to rethink why you  posted this game . Do you really want to genuinely improve if that means taking any criticism and comments like a man ( fiure of speech , you culd be a woman I don't know ) or do you want to gloat about your victory and seek comments that only play to the content of your ego. If you want to show off your game then post it in the Game Showcase forum . If you want to hear some critical advice on how you can improve , then get a game  which you tried to be aggressive in but lost . 


Avatar of Fresh

That's my thing.  I didn't hear critical advice.  Critical advice consists of counterpoints with reasons, evidence, etc.  Usually alternate lines or how you think it could play out.  Not saying something like, well you stomped him.  Sure, but what could be improved?  That's what I am asking.

 

Do i need 4 posts explaining this?


Avatar of Yury

The game was good, however, it was many blunders from white side.

You should critisize yourself at the first place, not to say "look how great my position is, how well all my pieces placed and how dumb my opponent moves are..." Otherwise you need no advice.


Avatar of TalFan
Fresh wrote:

That's my thing.  I didn't hear critical advice.  Critical advice consists of counterpoints with reasons, evidence, etc.  Usually alternate lines or how you think it could play out.  Not saying something like, well you stomped him.  Sure, but what could be improved?  That's what I am asking.

 

Do i need 4 posts explaining this?


But what do you want us to say ? It is like delivering a scholar's mate than asking how I can improve . Why not just post one of your losses where you failed to execute an atack ?


Avatar of Fresh

... Did you seriously just compare that to a scholar's mate?  I am asking because that position clearly offered a lot of opportunities and I chose a relatively safe one as opposed to trying a Knight sac (the most obvious other combination) or something.  I wanted to see if any better attackers had recommendations for better attacking series out of my position.  Few of my losses result from me getting an overwhelming position and failing an attack.  Typically I get a material advantage and look to trade into a favorable endgame.  This time I went for the throat.  So I wanted advice on it, regardless of it working out.


Avatar of Yury
It is hard to judge what should you improve because the opponent seems to be a lot weaker then yourself. Try to show different game maybe with stronger oponent where actual fighting took place (not total domination) or where u lost.