Please help analyze my game and suggest improvements

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sagar2305

 

I think my King was constantly under attack once I castled and before I realized what was going on it was too late! I know I need a lot of improvements but what could I have done better in this game? 

Sqod

Let me try using my checklist again (this is only my 2nd time using it) to answer your questions...

CHECKLIST OF COMMON VIOLATIONS OF HEURISTICS

("+" means a violation.)

 

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OPENING

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Was the opening passive / second rate (versus strong / aggressive / top notch)?

Examples:

WHITE IS PASSIVE

o Center Game: 1. e4 e5 2. d4

o Scotch Game: 1. e4 e5 2. Nf3 Nc6 3. d4

o Vienna Game: 1. e4 e6 2. Nc3

o Bishop's Opening: 1. e4 e5 2. Bc4

o Van't Kruijs Opening: 1. e3

o Larsen's Opening: 1. b3

o Hungarian Opening: 1. g3

BLACK IS PASSIVE

o Philidor's Defense: 1. e4 e5 2. Nf3 d6

o Scandinavian Defense: 1. e4 d5

o Nimzowitsch's Defense: 1. e4 Nc6

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Was the opening third rate?

Examples:

o Grob's Attack: 1. g4

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Was the opening one that is known to be faulty / very weak?

Examples:

o Damiano's Defense: 1. e4 e5 2. Nf3 f6 3. Nxe5 fxe5??

o Philidor's Defense: 1. e4 e5 2. Nf3 d6 3. d4 Bg4?!

o Petroff's Defense: 1. e4 e5 2. Nf3 Nf6 3. Nxe5 Nxe4?!

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Was the opening one that is generally considered unsound, especially a gambit by Black?

Examples:

o Elephant Gambit: 1. e4 e5 2. Nf3 d5?!

o Latvian Gambit: 1. e4 e5 2. Nf3 f5?!

o Englund Gambit: 1. d4 e5?!

o Albin Counter-gambit: 1. d4 d5 2. c4 e5?!

o 1. e4 e5 2. d4 d5?!

o From Gambit: 1. f4 e5

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Did the player fail to equalize with the necessary central pawn push?

Examples:

o Black failed to play ...d5 in an e-pawn opening

o Black failed to play ...e5 in a d-pawn opening

o Black failed to play ...d5 or ...e5 in a c-pawn opening

o White failed to play d4 in an e-pawn opening

o White failed to play e5 in a d-pawn opening

o White failed to play ...d4 or ...e4 in a c-pawn opening

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Did the player fail to advance a center pawn two squares when it would have been better to do so?

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Was the player unfamiliar with unit placement for this opening?

Examples:

o Blocking the c-pawn by N-QB3 in a d-pawn opening.

o Pinning via B-N5 on the same side as the pinning player has a fianchetto.

o White placing his queen on the half-open c-file in a Sicilian Defense.

o Black allowing c4 in a Sicilian Defense.

o White not playing Kb1 in a Sicilian Defense.

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DEVELOPMENT

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Did the player move the same unit twice in the opening?

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Was the queen developed too soon, before the minor pieces?

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Did the player put a knight on the rim?

Examples:

o White erred, queenside: Na3

o White erred, kingside: Nh3

o Black erred, queenside: ...Na6

o White erred, kingside: ...Nh3

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Did the player fail to castle early enough, in a position where castling was important?

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Did the player develop a bishop in front of an unadvanced central pawn without a good reason?

Examples:

+ White erred, queenside: Bd3 before d3 or d4

o White erred, kingside: Be3 before e3 or e4

o Black erred, queenside: Bd6 before d6 or d5

o Black erred, kingside: Be6 before e6 or e5

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Did the player fail to connect his rooks early enough?

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LOST TEMPI

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Did the queen get chased off, resulting in the loss of a tempo?

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Did the player play B-N5 only to get the bishop chased off by P-B3?

Examples:

o White erred, queenside: Bb5 ...c6

o White erred, kingside: Bg5 ...f6

o Black erred, queenside: ...Bb4 c3

o Black erred, kingside: ...Bg4 f3

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Did the player play an unnecessary prophylactic move, resulting in the loss of a tempo?

Examples:

o White erred, queenside: a3

o White erred, kingside: h3

o Black erred, queenside: a6

o Black erred, kingside: h6

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PAWNS

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Did the player get pawns doubled unnecessarily?

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Did the player expose his castled king by pawn advances?

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Did the player allow the opponent's queen to become centralized without a means of chasing it off by *pieces*?

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Did the player weaken his pawn structure by attempting to chase off a centralize queen via a 2-square pawn advance?

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Did the player get a weak "central triple pawn cluster"?

Examples:

o White erred, pawn cluster of d3-e3-e4

o Black erred, pawn cluster of d6-e6-e5

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FIANCHETTOS

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Did the player fail to complete a fianchetto (failed to move his bishop to N2)?

Examples:

o White erred, queenside: b3 but no Bb2

o White erred, kingside: g3 but no Bg2

o Black erred, queenside: b6 but no Bb7

o Black erred: kingside: g6 but no Bg7

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Did the player allow his fianchettoed bishop on his castled side to get traded off, resulting in weakened squares around his king?

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TACTICS

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Did the player overlook a mating combination?

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Did the player overlook the win of material?

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OTHER

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Did the player avoid a queen exchange that resulted in a worse position than if he had traded queens?

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Did the player make a premature attack, especially before all the pieces were developed?

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Did the player allow himself to get "queen slapped," resulting in loss of castling privilege in a risky position,

or loss of a tempo from needing to retreat a knight?

Examples:

o White erred: ...Qxd1+ Kxd1

o Black erred: Qxd8+ ...Kxd8

o White erred: ...Qxd1+ Nxd1

o Black erred: Qxd8+ Nxd8

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Did the player get a piece trapped?

Examples:

o Queen, especially by moving the queen too often in the opening

o Bishop, especially by capturing a rook pawn followed by P-N3 to trap it

o Rook, especially by moving a rook out too soon, especially laterally

o Knight

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Did the player fail to take advantage of weak moves or errors (positional or tactical)?

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