https://www.chess.com/analysis/game/live/139003810344?tab=analysis
Post your game and I will analyse it and give tips for free!

well turns out I know smiley in real life and he was the one who actually was ranting Abt this to me so I felt like should have brought this to your attention
Well, what if I review a game of Smileyface and he reviews a game of mine. Then instead of being competitors, we'll help each other out in our analytic endeavours.
honestly i think that is a greaat way to approach the situtation but you should probably send that to him on his forum
Thank buddy in advance!!
https://lichess.org/study/U3XCCYad/LjQfVEsc
Tips: Play more piece developing moves, in order to not lack behind in development, instead of queen and pawn moves.
Don’t sacrifice a piece if it doesn’t give you access to the opponent’s king or wins you material. Also like Levy says a good rule of thumb is you need 2 more attackers than your opponent has defenders.
Make sure your king is safe and watch out for possible checks on your king.