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I am trying to improve my game as much as possible so maybe anyone who wants to can help me out with some advice.

This is a game that I was winning in but it ended up as a draw. I think its because I am making bad positional decisions among other things and Im also not great at bringing home an advantage.

Any constructive criticisms (e.g. other lines that you think I should have played at any point) would be a great help. Thanks.

 

 

 

Avatar of Chessroshi
Why not plop the bish on the a2 g8 diagonal on 17 with bc4+. You draw the bish to b3 after the check and retain your extra piece.
Avatar of sstteevveenn
move 19, retreat your bishop, dont think it matters where... Bc3, Bg3, Bd4, all should be an easy win after you just play safe and swap off when you can.  I guess 19.Rfe1 also works.  It looks a bit like you stopped concentrating, maybe playing multiple games at once. 
Avatar of mercytononeZ

that was an interesing game

 

Avatar of nicovalens

Adding your own comments is required if you want people to help you.

 

Avatar of RedSoxpawn

yes that might help

 

Avatar of Fianghetto

Yes sorry about that. Should I have aimed to swap off the minor pieces and look for a promotion or should I have gone for the mate being a knight and a pawn up? I know letting him double up my pawns (and getting a point from the exhange) was a poor mistake that must have affected my chances in the endgame... but if I didnt allow that to happen (through some of sstteevveenn's comments) would exchanging and going for the promotion been the best plan?

And also on move 10 I recaptured with the queen. Would it have been better to recapture with the bishop? it might have made it more awkward for him to castle giving me more time to marshall an attack.

 Thanks for every comment.

Avatar of Debuwa

On move 13, instead of retreating your bishop to Bc3, you could have done Bc7. Your bishop cannot be attack for a while there. That would also limit some of black's moves.

Avatar of Don1
19 Rfe1 seems stronger: holds material & K-side pawn formation, challenges the R on the open file. i'm sure there are more improvements after that.
Avatar of Fianghetto
Don1 wrote: 19 Rfe1 seems stronger: holds material & K-side pawn formation, challenges the R on the open file. i'm sure there are more improvements after that.

At the time I made 19.Rad1 , I could see he would double up my pawns and gain my bish and knight for his rook but I was more concerned in occupying the open file and making steps towards his king. But I can see how keeping my position solid with 19 Rfe1 is far stronger, especially going into the endgame. Thanks for your comments.

Avatar of Kingfisher

I can't believe I'm giving advice on endgame but:

49.Re4+ Kf5 50.Kh1 zugzwang!

Or even better, work your way to playing Rf3. If he takes with bishop, you can undouble pawns, Kxh2 and the 2:1 pawn majority should be a relativly easy win.   


Avatar of misterfever
I agree that your move on turn 19 was the problematic one for you - He removed the defender for your bishop after you failed to protect the bishop or retreat it. 19. Bd4 does the same thing after 19...Rxf3 20. gxf3 20...Bxd4. I would say retreating to c3 is okay but defending the bishop with one of your rooks is better. Apart from that I thought you played a good game!

Avatar of sstteevveenn

Yes, i would just be looking to swap off pieces, especially the rooks, while looking out for errors that would give you an easy checkmate perhaps with your 2 rooks, or that allow you to get your rooks eating all his pawns on the 7th rank, but again, this would just be looking towards a simple endgame.  Once it's just your pawns and piece against his pawns, there's nothing he can do really.  You should also be careful of your own pawns on your 2nd rank. 

 

I also noticed your h pawn.  I think black should have taken this, and if possible you should have avoided giving him that opportunity.  Since he didnt take it, i think  34.h3 is better. That bishop cant touch it on a white square, and it prevents passed pawns without the black king helping out. 

 

On move 10, taking with the queen looks better to me than putting your bishop awkwardly in front of your queen, and after you swap off it looks like you have a good advantage (a pawn and development and black should be worrying about his king).  I would have considered castling queenside too, putting your rook on that nice open file.  

 


Avatar of sstteevveenn
19...Rxf3 20.Bxc5 seems ok, although i agree 19.Rfe1 is probably strongest. 
Avatar of craxxus

Swapping off material is of course a good way to go, but I think that 30.Rxf8 is not the best option in the position (although it is still very strong and likely winning).  I think 30.Rdd7 was a better choice.  In general, doubling rooks on your opponents second rank is an extremely difficult thing to meet.

Avatar of Fotoman
I want to go further back. White as early as move 12 should have adopted a plan of taking advantage of the open queen file and black's weakened black squares. I personally like 12.Nd2. This prepares for a queenside castle and jumping the knight to either c4 or e4. And I would place the blacksquared bishop on g3 instead. I would try to treat it more like a middle game and not an endgame. The pawn up is nice bonus, but not the win clincher. Capitalize on your space and tempo advantages. 
Avatar of Fianghetto

Thanks to everyone for your great advice - i didn't expect this much feedback but i guess i have underestimated the chess.com community. I will definately remember all the ideas mentioned and attempt not to repeat the mistakes I made in this game (it would be an insult not too for allowing you to watch this boring draw Wink).


Thanks again.

Avatar of Kingfisher
benws wrote: Kingfisher wrote:

I can't believe I'm giving advice on endgame but:

49.Re4+ Kf5 50.Kh1 zugzwang!

Or even better, work your way to playing Rf3. If he takes with bishop, you can undouble pawns, Kxh2 and the 2:1 pawn majority should be a relativly easy win.   


 how is that zugzwang? black just keeps moving his king back and forth and white cannot make any progress.


 Yes, but he has to move his king away from the bishop so Rxf4 can only be countered with gxf4 followed by Kxh2. Eventually, the white king can clear the way for his pawn faster then his black counterpart while at the same time leaving the black king on the rear of the pawn advance.

Enclosing a diagram to demonstrate: 


Avatar of Loomis

34. Ke2. You let your opponent take a pawn for no reason. Just play h3 here. This is a very simple mistake that has a very dramatic affect.

 

The remaining comments are not as blatant and their effect probably less:

18. Nf3. This move is ok, but it is risky. All of a sudden the knight is tied down to the defense of the bishop. A move like 18. Bg3 limits the counterplay of the opponent by keeping your pieces flexible.

We see the unpleasant consequences after 18. ... Re8. You chose 19. Rad1. This gives up two pieces for a rook, which is a negative material trade for you. Of course, the alternative 19. Bg3 Re2 where your opponent gets a rook on the 7th is unpleasant as well. However, material advantage is permanent, the dynamic advantage of the rook on e2 can eventually be overcome by 20. Rac1 and 21. Rfe1. (watch out for the opponent's storming g-pawn in the meantime.) 

 

28. Re7. I would prefer to limit the opponent's counterplay by 28. a3. That way you secure the tomb of the bishop. Bb8 loses to Re8+ forking the king and bishop. If he tries to move the king first, a check on the 7th rank followed by Rxb7 wins a pawn and forces a trade of rooks. 

 

 


Avatar of rootworm
I havent bothered to read all the responses to this so if I repeat something already said, i'm sorry. I don't think you went astray as far as your positional chess is concerned; it's your tactical vision man. You were up an entire piece and you gave it right back. I would have retreated the Bishop and swapped pieces. Also you had several zugzwang opportunities in the endgame. As far as suggestions for improvement, study tactics and simple endgames (mostly centered around zugzwang).
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