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#21 Alright.

awww i thought this was something else

Name:Sephiroth

Gender:Male

Age:27

Weapon: Masamune an 8ft katana

Magic: Supernova a massive burst of flame that has two variants 1.) variant is a waterproof fire(which is scientifically possible) 2.) variant evaporates all water around Sephiroth creating a temporary air bubble

Shadow flare summons fire around target to strike target after a short time

Abilities:

Can summon 2 clones per battle

When near death activate One-Winged Angel increasing all his stats by a good amount

Flash Slice-an instant dash that hits enemies temporarily freezing them to then rapidly hit them multiple times

Backstory: After being infused with Jenova cells he because a superhuman soldier that eventually got bitter at everyone

Personality/bonds/flaws: very prideful but will do what is necessary to win, no matter the cost

Extra: very powerful warrior who has limitless potential, but practically useless outside of the battlefield

Is this better, and can I add some magic? Or is this on the brink of being too OP?

Name: Natio

Gender: Female

Appearance: um im a person

Weapon(s)/item(s): i have a stick, a gun, and clothes

Magic: just normal magic

Backstory: i was

Personality/Flaws/Bonds: i rather u judge

Extra: .

Name: Dubia

Gender: Female

Appearance: Small, cute, and deceptively weak-looking humanoid anglerfish-creature. Has two esca (the lures) that glow a soft blue. Green-blue skin/scales draped in aquatic plants like seaweed or kelp. Has a hair-like mess of fins atop her head. She can open her jaws incredibly wide, revealing a mouth full of sharp teeth, able to swallow many things whole.

Weapon(s)/item(s): Rusty Harpoon with cord to make it capable of long range combat.

Magic: None

Backstory: A genetically altered anglerfish, created in some sort of lab. She escaped her containment and killed the researchers. She only is docile towards the organization members because they feed her every so often. She stole her harpoon and the cord she uses alongside it from a hunter/poacher/fisher.

Personality/Flaws/Bonds: Friendly towards pretty much anyone who has food. Otherwise, she's highly aggressive to anyone or anything else.

Extra:

- She can speak, but usually doesn't.
- Especially enjoys sour food.

bro was

Alright, uh, because I feel like a lot of you guys aren't that strong compared to... some... of the enemies you will be encountering, I'm just going to give you an extra touch of NPC assistance and adjust some things with a few fights so that I don't have to keep nitpicking at your characters.

I will, however, greatly advise weaponry capable of piercing armor, though whether by physical or magical means is entirely up to you.

Uh.... no.

1. Uh... weapons/items are not very fitting.

2. Backstory???

3. What is this "normal magic" you speak of?

4. Overall could use some time and effort. There's no rush to make a character, once everyone who wants to join has joined, then we'll start.

Accepted, but it would make balancing one heck of a lot easier if you wanted to take a stronger weapon. You guys are allowed to look like the professionals you are, you know.

You know what?

Slap a better weapon on there and change the backstory, and you've got yourself a character.

Weapon: A katana is, to my knowledge, an incredibly impractical weapon underwater. Also, this is a fairly futuristic RP.

Backstory: Just so that, y'know, it's more you, I guess? I guess you can keep it, but maybe drop the bitterness chunk. You guys are a team.

#37 Well, think about how slowly you swing your arm underwater. Now make that a bit slower. This is the problem we encounter: the water slowing you down too much to do much.