another poem

I want to cry 

to shed all the tears 

but I lack strength 

So they're still inside me 

just like you in my head 

There was no day 

In which I didn't think  

About you  

The day my heart didn't howl with despair and longing 

I miss my old self 

I'm going home 

Removing the smile mask 

Revealing Grief 

Being alone is okay 

But being lonely and being lonely 

are two different paths 

Paths on which 

We split up 

These paths will meet again  

But it will never be the same again 

I stumbled over my own pieces of heart 

I don't get up anymore 

My honest reaction:

lol 😂

nice

Very good job I translated it into ganglish, enjoy

I wanna weep, to rain my sorrow, but I’m a bit weak sauce, so all those saltwater gems are stuck inside, just like you rattlin' around in my noggin. Not a single day passed without you poppin’ up in my thoughts—my heart howlin’ like a wolf with all that ache and wishin’. I’m missin’ my old jolly self, hightailin’ it back home, rippin’ off the happy mask to show my inner sad clown. Bein’ solo’s fine, but bein’ lonely and really lonely? That’s a whole different ride! Roads where we parted ways, but they’ll cross again someday, just not the same ol’ song. Tripped over my own heart shards ‘n I ain’t gettin’ back up no more.

Nice poem 👏👏👏

Would it be to much to ask if you can talk to her she's feeling kinda down and upset i think and something feel's off about her try using open ended questions instade of yes and no questions

approach her with something like:

"I noticed you seem a bit down today. What's been going on? Is there anything on your mind you want to talk about?"

By asking open-ended questions, you give her the space to share her feelings and thoughts more freely, which can lead to a more meaningful conversation.

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