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Grammar Nazi: Please be careful with dangling modifiers
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"John shot Henry as he hid behind a tree."
What the heck does that mean? Was John hiding behind a tree when he shot Henry? Or was Henry hiding behind a tree when John shot him?
Reword, so that your predicate is not vague.
"Hiding behind a tree, John shot Henry."
Or . . .
"John shot Henry, who was hiding behind a tree."
Thank you,
GN