haiku

haiku thread:    ... a simple version.

5 words,

7 words, ( this line contrasts the idea in the first 5 to the lower 5 ).

5 words

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marysson picks up the pen,

the doorbell rings and it a billcollector,

marysson runs very far away.
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YOUR TURN.

chubby sat on a bench,

 seagulls flew overhead and "spotted" his head,

so much for the beach !

new site at chess.com

what think you venerate green yoda asks ?

(i think yoda moldy)

five syllables, not

five words, although there is some

scholarly debate.

aha, a true wisom of haiku,

i am but of the foolish public school,

hence, i think i am smarty.

hard to think nippon,

harder still to be nippon,

hard haiku to do,

i did open the thread with the third grade request of a "simple version"..( i have done my best, sitting beside the neckar, quite drunk, looking up at the hidelberg castle, and wondering...why do i still have a job when my pants are wet from spilled bier at lunchtime ...will the boss fire me when i get back or shall i just go home ? ).

( i am a forum fraud )...i am actually a three star general in mali and am just wasting my time here until i get notice that the coup is successful..then i will be president marysson and will no longer deign to speak with plebians such as yourselves ).

a joke i make with you,

life too hard not to laugh away,

laughing i die, die i.

old site now dead away,

new site bring great tears to many,

cry, whimper, post, no help