How could these Chess matches have gone?

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So I was writing a story that I was planning to post in a website (Like Wattpad and/or Fanfiction.net) and near the end of the story I planned to have 3 Chess matches. I have planned out how the 1st and 3rd match are gonna go but I am still planning out how the 2nd one is gonna go.

I have never played Chess before and so I dont have any experience playing it or understand the thinking put behind moves actually played, however I did do some research on Openings and plays that GMs have done and those are the Inspiration on some moves that were made in these games. However since I never played it before, I am sure the moves made in these Games arent always the best moves and I could have made the game better at a technical level. I wanted everyones input on how these games could have been better played so I can make the story better.

Here are the moves made and the image of the Checkmate:

Match 1: e4 c5 Nf3 d6 d4 cxd4 Nxd4 Nf6 Nc3 a6 h3 b5 Nd5 Bb7 Nxf6+ gxf6 c4 bxc4 Bxe4 O-O d5 Re1 Bxg2 Kxg2 Rg8+ Kh1 dxc4 Qf3 Qd7 Bf4 Qa7 Ra1d1 Nd7 Nf5 e5 Qc6 Rd8 Bxe5 Rg1+ Kxg1 fxe5 Rxe5+ Be7 Rxe7+ Kf8 Qh6+ Kg8 Qg7#

Match 3: d4 f5 c4 Nf6 g3 e6 Bg2 Be7 Nf3 O-O O-O d5 Nc3 c6 Qc2 dxc4 Rd1 Nd5 e4 Nb4 Qe2 Nd3 exf5 Rxf5 Be3 Qf8 b3 b5 a4 b4 bxc4 Nxf2 Bxf2 bxc3 Ne5 a5 Ra1c1 Bb4 Be1 Ra6 c5 Bb7 Bxc3 Bc8 Be4 Rf6 Rb1 Ra7 Qc2 g6 Ng4 Rf6f7 Qc1 Kh8 d5+ Bxc3 Qxc3+ Qg7 Qxg7+ Kxg7 Rxb8 exd5 Rxc8 dxe4 Ne5 Rf7c7 Rxc7+ Rxc7 Rd6 e3 Kf1 Re7 Nxc6 Re4 Nd4 Kh8 c6 e2+ Ke1 Re7 Ne6 Kg8 c7 Rxc7 Nxc7 Kf8 Rd7 h6 Ne6+ Kg8 Rg7+ Kh8 Kxe2 g5 g4 h5 gxh5 g4 h6 g3 Ng5 gxh2 Nf7#

If it is difficult to read the move being made then please tell me so I can reformat the way its written.

Here is basically the playstyle of the two players.

White Player: Understands the nuance of positions and moves and uses that knowledge to improve and strengthen his position in any way possible. If defending is what is needed to improve his position at the moment then he will do it, if attacking is what is needed then that is what he will do. What really defines his playstyle is that he knows how to find the winning strategy and make moves that will move toward that end goal as well as getting into an advantageous position. It doesnt matter what the opponent does as he will get to that end game he wants no matter what you do and the best you can hope for is to make him go on a detour or delay his timings but he will get to the destination regardless because no matter what you do he will improve his position enough to do whatever he was going to do in the first place.

Black Player: A younger sister of the White Player whose playstyle focuses on Defense and Counterattacks (which is why she plays black through the whole story). She is good at seeing weaknesses and disadvantages of her position and the enemies position and will try to capitalize on them while trying to eliminate or cover her own disadvantages. She is willing to play the long game if necessary. Another thing to note is that she always plays safe and hardly takes risks and is always looking to create a defensive position to eliminate or hide her weakness and disadvantages and constantly looking for that opportunity for that opportunity for counterattack. Another strength that defines her playstyle is that she can find things that no one else notices or at least most people in the room didnt see, this gives her an element of surpise when counterattacking.

You can tell me your ideas on how the game could have went better to see how you guys would have played the matches. In the story the White is supposed to win all 3 games but I wont mind if you guys telling me how the  Black side could have won.

I have to say after researching about Chess and the skill that goes into it I have grown fond of this game and started playing it myself from time to time. I hope to utilize my knowledge of Chess in the future stories I write.

Avatar of MagikKnight21
sorry if i sound rude
but did you seriously make a chess.com account just to get input on your wattpad story?
if so, off topic probably isnt the best place to do it
Avatar of notmtwain
 

You should be able to paste the games into the game editors here to see if they are legal moves.

 Something is off in the first game.