I made a small comic.

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I plan to make more like these and upload them to Webtoon. Anyway, I hope you enjoy:


I hope my handwriting is legible!
And of course, any and all constructive criticism is welcome!
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your handwriting is quite nice!

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Thank you! :]

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and the drawings are cute :>

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Thank you! x2

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It’s great πŸ˜ƒ

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Iconic-Ninja wrote:

It’s great πŸ˜ƒ

Thank you!

Any feedback?

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Overall, it’s very great. However, I would perhaps choose a higher contrast in the font so that you can read it better :]
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Iconic-Ninja wrote:
Overall, it’s very great. However, I would perhaps choose a higher contrast in the font so that you can read it better :]

Ah, ok! Thank you!

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I like it a lot!

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Thank you! Any feedback!

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Thank you! x4

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Maybe just make the words a bit easier to read?

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RealTactics960 wrote:

Maybe just make the words a bit easier to read?

Is contrast the issue, or handwriting too?

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No, it’s just a little hard to read panels like the β€œthe sun. A light” one

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RealTactics960 wrote:

No, it’s just a little hard to read panels like the β€œthe sun. A light” one

Ah, ok. Thank you!

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No problem!

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FIRE!!!!!!!!!πŸ”₯πŸ”₯

UR A W ARTIST!

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Aaaahβ€” thank you!

Any feedback?

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