I made a small comic.

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I plan to make more like these and upload them to Webtoon. Anyway, I hope you enjoy:


I hope my handwriting is legible!
And of course, any and all constructive criticism is welcome!
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your handwriting is quite nice!

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Thank you! :]

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and the drawings are cute :>

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Thank you! x2

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It’s great 😃

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Iconic-Ninja wrote:

It’s great 😃

Thank you!

Any feedback?

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Overall, it’s very great. However, I would perhaps choose a higher contrast in the font so that you can read it better :]
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Iconic-Ninja wrote:
Overall, it’s very great. However, I would perhaps choose a higher contrast in the font so that you can read it better :]

Ah, ok! Thank you!

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I like it a lot!

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Thank you! Any feedback!

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Thank you! x4

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Maybe just make the words a bit easier to read?

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RealTactics960 wrote:

Maybe just make the words a bit easier to read?

Is contrast the issue, or handwriting too?

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No, it’s just a little hard to read panels like the “the sun. A light” one

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RealTactics960 wrote:

No, it’s just a little hard to read panels like the “the sun. A light” one

Ah, ok. Thank you!

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No problem!

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FIRE!!!!!!!!!🔥🔥

UR A W ARTIST!

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Aaaah— thank you!

Any feedback?

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𝔗𝔥𝔢 𝔞𝔲𝔯𝔞 𝔰𝔭𝔯𝔢𝔞𝔡𝔰 '𝔯𝔬𝔲𝔫𝔡 𝔱𝔥𝔢 𝔥𝔬𝔲𝔰𝔢, 𝔩𝔦𝔣𝔱𝔰 𝔪𝔦𝔫𝔢 𝔬𝔴𝔫 𝔰𝔬𝔲𝔩 𝔱𝔬 𝔫𝔢𝔴 𝔩𝔢𝔳𝔢𝔩𝔰, 𝔱'𝔰 𝔞 𝔠𝔯𝔞𝔷𝔶 𝔳𝔦𝔟𝔢. 𝔗𝔥𝔢 𝔡𝔯𝔞𝔴𝔦𝔫𝔤𝔰 𝔞𝔯𝔱 𝔞 𝔫𝔢𝔴 𝔩𝔢𝔳𝔢𝔩𝔢𝔱𝔥 𝔬𝔣 𝔭'𝔯𝔣𝔢𝔠𝔱𝔫𝔢𝔰𝔰, 𝔞𝔫𝔡 𝔱𝔥𝔢 𝔦𝔡𝔢𝔞 𝔦𝔰 𝔪𝔬𝔳𝔦𝔫𝔤 𝔞𝔫𝔡 𝔯𝔢𝔞𝔩