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I made another Poem! again a plot twist.
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1/100 it’s a good poem but I want to see bongcloud
69/100 nice. I must say, you are quite creative.
91/100
Hello! I made another poem of mine named - "Ruthless Winds Can't Pause Your Flight" You have to rate the poem out of 100! but there is a catch, I will take the average rating that you guys gave, and if i get below 70 this time i will play Bongcloud in rated game until i win with it... Wish me luck guys! and here is the poem-
howling ruthless gusts can't pause your flight,
Within your soul, a tempest of fears takes hold.
which stops your way to reaching lofty heights.
O little bird, You've still got time,
To Sing and chime, soaring up so high.
Blazing sunshafts won't sear your wings,
In joy's excess, wings hasten their dance.
Igniting wings, unbeknownst, while you sing.
O little bird, don't ascend too high,
Once you tumble, You will distant heights
Dread's specter pulls, dragging you down,
Wings may flutter, hesitant, poised to shift.
stern might clasp wings, an iron grip on flight.
O little bird, liberate yourself,
Escape the clutches of your relentless will.
Any suggestions for this poem are welcome!
Take care and wish me luck!