A Fictional Short story. The recount of the murders of October 29th, 1989.

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TrooperChessOrTC

Welcome.

(Fictional)

A bit of context, this articule is being written in the (Extreme Past, the Past, and the Present, also there will be an incedent report to spice things up.) it's a report about a murder. Enjoy.

 

Incident report, (I do not know how to make a proper incident report, sorry!)

4 dead, murdered.

October 29th, 1989.

 

The past

Investigator, "So Bill, do you mind recounting your story of the events that played out on 29th of October?"

 

The extreme past.

Bill ""Yes, Sir!" That's what I said to her!" Ha ha!

 

The past.

Bill "That got them to laugh. Even Harry smiled."

Investigator. "Sir if we could please get on track why do you think..."

Bill. "Hold on. We where a unit, brothers, going to get through all of the story, to saviour the times of happiness we had before the incident. Anyhow..."

 

The extreme past.

Bill "Yeah you should have seen her face! Man did she blush a bright red!"

Tom, "Yeah just like that one time Harry pied his pant's during basic training. Ha, still remember that, right Red Head!"

Harry, "Argh, what I te'll ya about callin me that!?, Huh, Tommy gun!."

 

The Past.

Bill, "Tommy got right up in Harries face after that."

 

The extreme past.

Tom, "What did you say Bitch!? Do have to slug you back in place again!"

 

The Past.

Investigator, "So wouldn't you say that it was..."

Bill, "Hold on to that thought, as being the only surviving member, have to recount the story with as much truthful detail as possible."

Investigator, "Then go on Sir."

Bill. "Thank you, yes that's right, Jim was trying....

 

Incident Report.

Colt M 1911.

 

Extreme Past.

Jim "Hold on you two! Stop fighting over such petty things."

Jack, "WOULD YOU ALL JUST SHUT UP, can't stand the noise, the blasted noise!"

Jim/Bill "Yes, we should all just stop bicke...

Harry, "NO! I'm tired of the insults!"

 

The Past.

(The investigator is getting annoyed. It should be obvious, yet...)

Investigator, "Hold on Sir, if you don't mind, wasn't there 6 of you in that unit and weren't all of you there that night?"

Bill, "Sigh, yes, Fred was a quite daydreamer, if recall right, he was starring out the window, he didn't even locked shocked when he realized he was about to die, to bad there wasn't much left of his face."

Investigator, "So wouldn't you still agree that THE other man alive, who fled the scene would be the one responsible?"

Bill, "Hold on just a bit more. Alright, where were we..."

 

The Extreme past.

Tom, "Yeah!, well why don't you stop being such a Fraddie Cat for once!"

Harry, "Oh yeah huh, you want to see the brave side of me!"

Jim, "Guys stop! Let's not get this any more heated."

Tom, "Yeah just clam down Red Head."

Bill, "Both of you just stop fighting! Tom, top with the name calling, and Harry stop letting them get to you, grow a pair bud."

Harry, "No, want some change tonight!"

Jack, "Awwww, stop all the noiseeeeeeeeee!"

 

The past.

Bill, "Yeah, that's when our best shooter started taking shots with his pistol. Didn't miss a shot, one bullet to each person he shot."

"While he turned to shoot Fred, was able to tackle the gunman, yet he was able to still find an escape from it all."

Investigator, "Who is "He" mister Bill?" "Wouldn't you say it was Harry?"

Bill, "No, it was.....

 

The present. June 25th, 2019.

We are at Bill's funeral.

A kind old man is standing near the casket, not a care in the world. Just pleasantly looking at Bill's aged face.

Bill's wife. "Harry, is that you? It can't be. Haven't seen you in over 30 years! Where have you been?"

Harry, "Hey, sorry to hear of your loss, Bill was a great guy, he knew how to change people for the better. Actually have just been enjoying life. But it is me, have the bullet hole to prove it."

 

Incident report.

5 bullets missing from the Colt.

5 bullets to be reported fired.

Only 4 bullet holes found, all within an individual  body.

TrooperChessOrTC
IAMBBW wrote:

What on Earth are you talking about?

It's a fictional short story.

TrooperChessOrTC

There is a way to find out who actually carried out the murder.

BinturongBC

Hard to read, pun intended. The time jumping make it interesting, yet difficult to follow. Somewhat conflicting details, but I guess that's part of the story. 

BinturongBC

Ooohhh, a mystery. Nice! 

BinturongBC

Nothing about the future? 

TrooperChessOrTC
BinturongBC wrote:

Nothing about the future? 

Huh, what do you mean?

BinturongBC
TrooperChessOrTC wrote:
BinturongBC wrote:

Nothing about the future? 

Huh, what do you mean?

You have a variety of pasts and no sci-fi or future predict. I only observation. Interest story. 

TrooperChessOrTC

Thanks.