Lost in darkness( poem 😊)

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Taking a step forward in darkness .

colourful alluring world is turning black around my eyes .

terrified body restricts , only one who dares is heart

for taking a step forward in darkness.


Entering in a complete unknown hidden world .

contradicting my beliefs ,darkness isn't dead!!!!

instead ,

Its completely alive , come and live with it .

Its silence , listen it.
Its solace , feel it .
Befriend it anytime ,talk for hours , it never hurts .


My soul shook after what my eyes witnessed .

A narrow beam of light from nowhere

touches the hand of darkness from everywhere !!!!!

light and darkness are not enemies instead , unseparatable friends .

Opposite faces of same coin , linked together .

Light isn't the fastest darkness always reached there first to wait for it ........

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Bravo!😀

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Too dark for me . . . happy.png

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😊

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Very nice!  This phrase "A narrow beam of light from nowhere" is stunning and to me, it's the turning point of the poem. 

It reminds me of this poem, which gives the reader the same type of awakening:

Ring the bells that you can ring,

Forget your perfect offering.

There's a crack in everything...

That's how the light gets in.

(Leonard Cohen)