My Song - Imogen
My new song
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How did you make that song?
Using my brain. And bandlabs, but I also used my electric keyboard
Pretty cool, I really liked a lot of things you did with it. I have a main critique - the part that comes in at 1:09 doesn't fit at all and is extremely jarring. You're setting a B natural minor tonal center for everything leading up to that, and then BOOM the first note of this loud solo is the major 3rd of B minor and takes us for a journey while we struggle to orient what is tonic. If you moved this same melody up by a minor 3rd so it starts on F# instead of D# it would be much better.
Thank youu for your advice.I will take that in for a newer song
It's good enough that it's worth criticizing take that as a compliment
https://youtu.be/j5IPxbtZ5Ig
Enjoy