im going to give an honest opinion of: dont quit your day job.
my rap!
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Rap needs to rhyme, beat keeps the time, sublime, truth rings a chime. I got to go, cherries flashin' like 5 - 0, one thing to know; I'm the chess gangsta, no pranksta, rollin' on the south side, party on the westside, unite don't divide, and I got one bad ass ride!
heres wat u need to see,air fresheners,they aint got nothin on me!im the best ofthe best,the fresh of the fresh,and u will remain the less of the less.i knew mr clean when he had a afro,and yall haters probaly sayin "so"!As im typin this,u might want to crawl back to yo abyss.i got more beats than a drum,evertime i rap,people lookin all glum,cause they know who it is,its DRfresh!cause yo raps look like a big..ol...MESS!