I like this story! And not just because I'm the one starting it off for a change.
Well in my first fan fic which I ditched you were also the starting off charcter so I thought I would keep it like that.
Ry and myself are the starting characters in my series
ok, sorry I didn't get this posted yesterday... SO HERE IS AN EXTRA CHAPTER!!!!!!
Chapter Fifteen: The choice
Last time: Holo was teleported to someplace called Tomatoland by the living suit and landed in a tent with animatronics? Like his bot it seemed? All he had to do is activate them and he would have an army! He activated a few of them and sent them on their way toward the entrance of the tent and outside. Then he activated a few more and tweaked them... just a little bit!
Meanwhile:
Ryan peaked out from behind the wall he was behind and saw shadows moving away from him and rustling around inside. It seemed like the robots were making the chirps as if they were being made... Ryan cut off that thought before it took root. Ryan pulled out one of his c4’s, tossed to the middle of the room, and hit the button on his wrist as he ducked out of the exploding tent.
Tomato was rooting around the noiseless tent and found almost nothing... except for a business card with no name? When he heard a loud boom for Ryan’s tent he suddenly ran outside toward Ryan’s tent to help.
Jen was walking toward the lone shadow and hiding behind various objects when the figure turned around... and she dropped her knife in surprise. It made a small plop in the dirt and the person walked toward the sound saying, “I know you’re here, come out, come out, wherever you are” as a loud boom went off in the distance. “Dang it, my machines have probably been destroyed. But you meddler must die for trespassing into my territory!” Jen tried to melt into the tent wall and slip back under it but the puppet master grabbed her leg and she screamed.
Tomato heard both the scream and the explosion and had to choose one direction. He chose the screaming since it seemed more urgent than the explosion since he knew ry knows how to not kill himself with explosions.
Chapter Sixteen: Universes galore, through the portal...
Last time: Tomato heard both the scream and the explosion and had to choose one direction. He chose the screaming since it seemed more urgent than the explosion since he knew ry knows how to not kill himself with explosions (he hoped)
Meanwhile:
Werewolf and Mint chose to try going to through the blue portal in search of some superheroes to aid them search for more people crossing over. “It can’t get worse, can it?” said Werewolf as he tapped the blue marker on the map. Mint replied, “You never sa...” The words were cut off as the blue portal they had created whisked them off to a new world.
Meanwhile:
Holo was getting more animatronics, and then the tent exploded. The suit held as the dog instead stabilized the controls and held off the attack on whatever threw the explosive. It damaged up to 2/10 on the hertz scale, Holo read from his console. ‘That’s not normal!’ Holo thought through the possibilities and all at once depressurises the air around the tent, making the tent suck into Holo’s vacuum cleaner and no places to hide. “Come out, come out, where ever you are!” Holo laughed.
bonus question: What WAS Mint trying to actually say?
Correct!
Just for that Leo, you are in the next chapter 
Yes, quite interesting
Cool Leo would you mind being Spider-Man?
I find that hard to believe. It's so good already.
Chapter Seventeen: Spiderman, but not
Last time: Holo was getting more animatronics, and then the tent exploded. The suit held as the dog instead stabilized the controls and held off the attack on whatever threw the explosive. It damaged up to 2/10 on the hertz scale, Holo read from his console. ‘That’s not normal!’ Holo thought through the possibilities and all at once depressurises the air around the tent, making the tent suck into Holo’s vacuum cleaner and no places to hide. “Come out, come out, where ever you are!” Holo laughed.
Meanwhile:
Mint and werewolf landed on the top of a skyscraper but Mint lost his balance and fell off the rooftop. “Mint!!!!!!!” cried Werewolf. “Never fear, Leo’s here! Brook here, Lyn there, Brooklyn everywhere!” said someone called Leo who landed neatly on the roof carrying Mint. “Hey my name is Leo but you probably already knew that! Anyways I got to go! See you fellow citizens!”
Meanwhile:
Jen was screaming her head off in terror at the puppetmaster who had her leg in his grasp. As Tomato approached, the puppetmaster growled and said, “I smell another. Call it off and you maybe may live.” Jen yells, “Flee! Leave me! I’ll be fine!” Tomato listens with uncertainty as the puppetmaster puts a gag in Jen’s mouth and moves back into the shadows.
all I want in your story auk is be a mod for chess.com lol
This could probably happen. In fact that was one of my thoughts.
noting that I check for cheaters in matches?