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And since I figured that this is going to be booming, here’s the next chapter right now! Also if you want to finish another chapter, just leave a message on this thread!
Chapter Two: Puppets
Last Time: Ryan had the voice on the phone say, “I’m coming for you,” and said to Jen, “No, everything isn’t alright. It’s worse than we thought!”
Meanwhile: The Puppet-Master started carving something while he was thinking. The Puppet-Master was trying to make a new plan to put into action. But every plan he thought of, he thought of a solution that Ryan would hunt him down for. The Puppet-Master slammed his hands down over his head, and screamed in extreme shame of his mind. He shouted at himself saying, “Why do I think too much?! None of them would work! Maybe if I think small...” The Puppet-Master shamefully got up and dropped his carving tools. He then placed the tools on his desk and looked at what he carved. He whispered to himself, “Yes, YES!!!”
Meanwhile:
Ryan was getting in his car with his secretary, Jen. Ryan drove off to the town called Tomatotown in search of some villains but mainly the Puppet-Master. Ryan talked to Jen about the Puppet-Master’s powers and how to combat them. Jen wasn’t really listening, but heard something like telepathy, waves, puppets, controlling, and coldness... Ryan stopped in exasperation.
When Ryan got to the place called Tomatoland, it looked like a torn-down circus with nothing around except a warehouse, half-collapsed circus tent, and a table with a phone on it. There was no one around... Ryan said, “Stay here and guard the car, ok Jen? Jen said, “Sure.” Ryan got out and walked into the half-deflated circus tent. Jen, 5 minutes later, heard a scream from inside the warehouse!
rychessmaster1 wrote:
Reminder, the “Jen” gig is over
What
Guess what! I got chapter 3 out too!
Chapter Three: Puppetmaster revealed
Last Time: Ryan said, “Stay here and guard the car, ok Jen? Jen said, “Sure.” Ryan got out and walked into the half-deflated circus tent. Jen, 5 minutes later, heard a scream from inside the warehouse!
As Jen glances at the tent and starts to run toward it, Ryan comes back out with ... someone else? The other person seems to be supporting Ryan. She ran toward them and the other person said, “Start that car now!” She went and started the car, and the other two jumped in, and she gunned the engine away toward the office back in the city.
Meanwhile:
The Devil paced back and forth in his lair thinking about ... something. He was thinking about someone called the puppetmaster whom had been living for far too long. He said to himself, “If I use the weapon, the puppetmaster will die, but if I don’t use it, those rascals might kill him instead without the city as well... I think the charades can go a bit longer!” Jason laughed evilly and sat down on his couch and watched some doomsday preppers while laughing at the ingenious of humans.
Meanwhile:
Once Ryan woke up and they got back to the office, she asked them both, “What exactly happened in there?” And to the other person she asked, ”And what’s your name?” The person answered, “Tomato. And the other question is better answered by this person; What’s his name?” Ryan answered, “It’s Ryan but first explain why you were held hostage there?” Jen asked, “Hostage?” “It’s a long story,” said Tomato, “but let’s start now. I was caught spying on the Chinese embassy for a job I was doing. But long story short, I was caught by a certain Puppet-Master, and tranferred to my old Tomato circus where no one would look for me.” Ryan questioned, “Are you with or against the Puppet-Master?” Tomato answered, “Yep definitely against! But we need more tomatopower to defeat him.” Jen said, “You mean manpower right?” “Nope tomatopower! :)” They parked once they got to the office, and decided to just spend the night there. Tomato took the couch, Jen took the roll-out bed in the closet, and Ryan took his couch in his office.
When Tomato woke up in the middle of the night, he heard a noise from outside. He went to go wake up Jen from the bed and he stopped. He realized he couldn’t move! He looked behind him and feared... the worst.
hitthepin wrote:
Jason is now super edgy. OOF. Also, where am I?
You aren’t in the story yet as well as a few other characters
May 20, 2019
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I just love how I'm the bad guy of the story XD. I'm not complaining; it's absolutely great
May 20, 2019
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rychessmaster1 wrote:
Fort horse got what? Two points?
Oh that. But so what? At least I don’t walk around the forums saying “your team sucks.” Personally, I’d rather lose the NSPBCL and not say that than the alternative.
May 20, 2019
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rychessmaster1 wrote:
Jason doesn’t want to play bulldog with me?
Well I mean, idk how to play Bulldog anyway, but even if I did I'm not really in the mood to play right now. But thanks for offering anyway
JasonGrace2017 wrote:
I just love how I'm the bad guy of the story XD. I'm not complaining; it's absolutely great
Ok
Hoping to get the next one up within about a day maybe
Chapter 4: The Devil’s deal
Last time: When Tomato woke up in the middle of the night, he heard a noise from outside. He went to go wake up Jen from the bed and he stopped. He realized he couldn’t move! He looked behind him and feared... the worst.
When Jen woke up she was surprised to see Tomato gone from the couch. She woke up Ryan and had a look around to find him. They looked high, low, and all around but they couldn’t find him...
Earlier:
Tomato couldn’t move anything except turning his head, so he did. He looked behind him to say a die, that started to talk to him in a strange language. Tomato said, “I don’t understand you. What are you?” The mysterious person said, I am what you become later on, always forward never back, and a have a 3 headed dog named Holo? I don’t know how to rhyme yet... Anyways want to make a deal?” The Devil reaches out his hand and Tomato ... took it.
Meanwhile: Jen and Ryan finished looking around and didn’t find Tomato. When they got their coats to go to the coffee shop to get breakfast and look to see if Tomato was there, Tomato just appeared behind them saying “Stop, we can’t leave!”