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There’s a reason why though! grin.png

eryxc

Chapter 5: The blow to withhold, deal is foretold

 

Last time: Jen and Ryan finished looking around and didn’t find Tomato. When they got their coats to go to the coffee shop to get breakfast and look to see if Tomato was there, Tomato just appeared behind them saying “Stop, we can’t leave!”

 

When Tomato started talking to them, it seemed like he was telling his life story but it was just his extreme background! He told of his past. He told of the life he foretold and will never know in a parallel universe and even foretold their next reactions. When he stopped talking, they got tired of his voice, lol (ok sorry...).

 

Tomato stopped talking and finally said, “... and the puppet master’s weakness is nothing. I’m sorry guys, but there’s no known way to defeat him, that we know of yet at least!” “There’s got to be a way”, replied Ryan. Jen asked, “Wait how do you know all this?” Tomato sighed and said, “I sold my ... money to Him. Sorry enough jokes... I sold my soul. I’m sorry guys, but I work for Him now.” “Wait who is Him?”, asked Ryan. “He is coming, but since he has my soul, he can sense where I am. Hide now!” Ryan hides in the bathroom behind a toilet, while Jen hides in a secret room under the carpet under her desk.

 

Meanwhile:

 

I walked to the shore and looked at the sand waited for the time to pass till sunset. It passed and I waited. I waited for 36 years before I left. I waited for her, and she left me and was called my Destiny. I am ... the Lone Ranger.

eryxc

Hope you enjoy chapter 5!!

hitthepin

Woah woah woah. What? Who’s this new guy? And Tomato sold his soul to the literal Devil? I think the Devil is in my story, too. Lol.

Hawaiian_King
Dang i need popcorn for this it’s good all these characters are awesome can’t wait for next one
Jasob_Hendrix

*Laughs in evil*

Hawaiian_King
This evil Jason is strange but I dig it XD
Hawaiian_King
I just read through again there’s so many good unanswered questions that leave the readers on the edge of their seats. What’s the Devils draw here? How do Jen and Ryan unravel this mystery? Who is Tomato loyal to? Who’s is mysterious Lone Ranger and who has he lost?

-New York Times
Hawaiian_King
Also is there more forums like this I kinda like it lul
hitthepin

Have you seen the Indieverse?

eryxc
hitthepin wrote:

Woah woah woah. What? Who’s this new guy? And Tomato sold his soul to the literal Devil? I think the Devil is in my story, too. Lol.

yes he did (maybe)

eryxc

Hoping for 6 out by 2 or 3 days

hitthepin

Yeesh, you’re shaming me.

eryxc
hitthepin wrote:

Yeesh, you’re shaming me.

Me? How?

Hawaiian_King

I read through the Indieverse and bruh why dont you people make books 

Jasob_Hendrix

IKR? I would definitely buy the books

eryxc

If you know who I am... I have a book

Hawaiian_King
you’re JK Rowling so technically all these characters are gay
Hawaiian_King
i’m just kidding
Hawaiian_King
SO IM JK😱😱