wonderful
poem 10?
Sort:
Beautiful poem, as usual. :)
:)
beautiful
My problems now fly :P only comment on that is that i like drift away or something better seeming it fits the sea...xept seagul..nvmxd
haha i love the poem it's amazing:) you exceeded very of my expectations!
nice.
heejo , you do know that u can use any line of my poem for your stories right? and thanks ^^
yes i do but i dont have anything fitting this :P youd get all the credit tough and i might use 1 poem..
sure , anything
thanks but i cant use this its to..seaish xD
haha, make a water scene
won't you write a story for me ? haha
and they were bathing in the sea while the monster attacked, they put down the guns and they jumped into the water, the monsters jumped in to and they had a swimming party
i'm writing 4 already xD i cant do 5
and they are all for you
wait , you said love story was for another girl ,lier , haha ^^
^^ no it'sfor you you helped me with it
well, I was just the editor tho , the audience is different , haha
confusing
Daughter of the Sea
My face filled with melancholy
My fair youth preserved
My long , black hair dancing ,
My deep, dark eyes filled with concern
I was going back to my inheritance ,
An inheritance from living
I walk back to my mother
She was calling
Her winds kissing my face ,
Her warmth and cold wrapped around me
Her song , her melody ,
And she continues this orchestra throughout eternity
The taste of her salty air ,
But her sweetness I know
Her pleasant sand , sending warm jolts up me ,
She’s trying to console and make me happy
But she herself has her own ,
Her pains , her lies , and her woes
She take life from a few
But makes millions of others survive
I walked towards her ,
Step by step making gentle imprints on the sand ,
I continue you walk , my hair blowing against myself ,
I walk with my pains and my burdens locked up at hand
Her waves welcoming
I step into her waters with care ,
They were neither cold or warm
Shallow or deep ,
Her buoyancy making me fly ,
She knows me by whole ,
Her kindness , her bliss , her console ,
She shows me life with her own
The foam massaging my toes ,
After every single wave
I know she’s telling me something
Something in her majestic ways
Every wave an obstacle , I withstand it with pride
And I guess that’s how to face problems in life
It passes away eventually,
Leaving happiness like sea shells behind
I look at her with different eyes ,
My problems now fly
She made them go away herself , away from me
Therefore she is the mother , she is the sea
-Phavi Kannan
(went to the beach again )