POEM

nowadays, in this e-era there are so many people loving poems, it is amazing sign I suppose!

Upon the dewy morning I impart;

My bed doth smell like broccoli fart.

Now you add two lines, and all of a sudden we have a thread!

T'was the dog's idea of a subtle treat:

This aroma nestling within my sheets

``If my career stops tomorrow even today

 I`d still be happy because I still  have my family

And I know than I can always go back to them``

http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=fvwp&NR=1&v=kx4WreJXTcw

Recheck your spelling of word #1.

Theoreticalboy and CBA there is no need for this nonsense here. If you dont like the poem thats fine not everyone is into poetry so paste your behaviour elsewhere.

Thanks

Every one has there own opinion of poetry and I appreciate that. But you dont have to make those silly comments on here

Poetry is something people can relate to, even if it is written backwards and inside out. To me it was a beautiful poem. No matter who wrote it.

Is this a joke thread?

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I just wonder if you have ever read any other peoms before? And what is it about this one that you thought was so special you wanted to share it here?

I have read many poems before and is this my favorite ? No. But anyone can post what they like on here and I just wanted to share so there was no need for bad comments from others

Thanks ciljettu , you are correct:)

It wasnt a nasty comment. And anyone can post anything on here, and i did. I was just curious about what the thing was about this poem you wanted to share.  Just opening the discussion. 

I wasn't talking about you but the others. This poem relates to one of my groups. I posted it there and on here also

You can post sure cba

I am sure there are some poems written where English was not the writer's first language, that may also be worth a mention too..

I'm open to reading anything as long as its not foul :)