What do you think about my song (Dating with an Ex-Enemy)

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Post what you're thinking about my song in the comments! Here are the lyrics :

Emil
We'll stay together forever
Forever until the end
Coz I believe that you changed
Yes, I always believed in you
'Cause there's no pain with you
You're wonderin' why I am missing you, I know
You might think that I'm still against you
(Yeah, yeah)
 
 
 
But time passes and people change
Wonderin' if you changed that much, oh
I just want you to be my boyfriend
Yeah, even if we're not dating
I want that we could stay friends forever
I know that we were breaking up a lot
But time passes and people change
 
 
 
 
There's so much to know about you, Emil
Yeah, I'm still wonderin'
Lot of things about you
But I know
That you've changed a lot (a lot)
Yes, but you might wonder
Why I am making this
'Cause I was against you
 
 
 
 
But time passes and people change
Wonderin' if you changed that much, oh
I just want you to be my boyfriend
Yeah, even if we're not dating
I want that we could stay friends forever
I know that we were breaking up a lot
But time passes and people change
 
 
And even me
Noticed so many things
They'd happened in our relation
Yeah, some people be like
If you switch sides, you're gon' have to claim your place
I'll do that for some people
But never for you
'Cause you'll be forever in my heart
Wasn't I against you, did you ever wondered that?
Yeah...
 
But time passes and people change
Wonderin' if you changed that much, oh
I just want you to be my boyfriend
Yeah, even if we're not dating
I want that we could stay friends forever
I know that we were breaking up a lot
But time passes and people change
 
So our relation will maybe be like
That I won't
Let you make me count up all the reasons to stay with you
And there would be
No reason why you and I are not succeeding, ah
(Yeah, yeah)
Now I am somewhat thinkin' to not think that much
About you
Oh, did I just lie?
With my feelings on fire
Guess I'm a bad liar
 
...
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noice

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its not the last version

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im gonna editing and updating

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its this way now

Lyrics :

Emil
We'll stay together forever
Forever until the end
Coz I believe that you changed
Yes, I always believed in you
'Cause there's no pain with you
You're wonderin' why I am missing you, I know
You might think that I'm still against you
(Yeah, yeah)
 
 
 
But time passes and people change
Wonderin' if you changed that much, oh
I just want you to be my boyfriend
Yeah, even if we're not dating
I want that we could stay friends forever
I know that we were breaking up a lot
But time passes and people change
 
 
 
 
There's so much to know about you, Emil
Yeah, I'm still wonderin'
Lot of things about you
But I know
That you've changed a lot (a lot)
Yes, but you might wonder
Why I am making this
'Cause I was against you
 
 
 
 
But time passes and people change
Wonderin' if you changed that much, oh
I just want you to be my boyfriend
Yeah, even if we're not dating
I want that we could stay friends forever
I know that we were breaking up a lot
But time passes and people change
 
 
And even me
Noticed so many things
They'd happened in our relation
Yeah, some people be like
If you switch sides, you're gon' have to claim your place
I'll do that for some people
But never for you
'Cause you'll be forever in my heart
Wasn't I against you, did you ever wondered that?
(Yeah...)
 
But time passes and people change
Wonderin' if you changed that much, oh
I just want you to be my boyfriend
Yeah, even if we're not dating
I want that we could stay friends forever
I know that we were breaking up a lot
But time passes and people change
 
So our relation will maybe be like
That I won't
Let you make me count up all the reasons
To stay with you
And there would be
No reason
Why you and I are not succeeding, ah
(Yeah, yeah)
Now I am somewhat thinkin'
To not think that much
About you
Oh, did I just lie?
With my feelings on fire
Guess I'm a bad liar
 
 
Hopefully you don't stand all this sh!t
I love you but I f***ing hate myself
Hopefully you see it clear
So wonderin' if you could be
In a relation
With me (uh-huh)
When you couldn't
Stand all those b!tches
Who hate you
Yeah, you was friend with me
But you hated my friends
(Uh-huh)
 
 
Tell me that I'm trash and that you could easily replace me
Tell me that I'm strung out, wasted on the daily
Tell me that you wish that we've never been friends
You hate me because my friends are your enemies
Prolly 'cause there's no way that I can break up with some of your enemies
(No way)
 
So even if we're just friends
Our relation
Might not succeed, ah
'Cause you hated some of my friends
And you're prolly still hating on them
 
Yeah, but there's a way
That we can succeed, yeah, yeah
Just I'll keep my friendship of the persons you hate secret
Finally found how we can succeed, ah
But no, how could we?
So I guess that our relation 
Might not succeed, ah ah
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Lyrics :

Emil
We'll stay together forever
Forever until the end
Coz I believe that you changed
Yes, I always believed in you
'Cause there's no pain with you
You're wonderin' why I am missing you, I know
You might think that I'm still against you
(Yeah, yeah)
 
 
 
But time passes and people change
Wonderin' if you changed that much, oh
I just want you to be my boyfriend
Yeah, even if we're not dating
I want that we could stay friends forever
I know that we were breaking up a lot
But time passes and people change
 
 
 
 
There's so much to know about you, Emil
Yeah, I'm still wonderin'
Lot of things about you
But I know
That you've changed a lot (a lot)
Yes, but you might wonder
Why I am making this
'Cause I was against you
 
 
 
 
But time passes and people change
Wonderin' if you changed that much, oh
I just want you to be my boyfriend
Yeah, even if we're not dating
I want that we could stay friends forever
I know that we were breaking up a lot
But time passes and people change
 
 
And even me
Noticed so many things
They'd happened in our relation
Yeah, some people be like
If you switch sides, you're gon' have to claim your place
I'll do that for some people
But never for you
'Cause you'll be forever in my heart
Wasn't I against you, did you ever wondered that?
(Yeah...)
 
But time passes and people change
Wonderin' if you changed that much, oh
I just want you to be my boyfriend
Yeah, even if we're not dating
I want that we could stay friends forever
I know that we were breaking up a lot
But time passes and people change
 
So our relation will maybe be like
That I won't
Let you make me count up all the reasons
To stay with you
And there would be
No reason
Why you and I are not succeeding, ah
(Yeah, yeah)
Now I am somewhat thinkin'
To not think that much
About you
Oh, did I just lie?
With my feelings on fire
Guess I'm a bad liar
 
 
Hopefully you don't stand all this 
I love you but I hate myself
Hopefully you see it clear
So wonderin' if you could be
In a relation
With me (uh-huh)
When you couldn't
Stand all those enemies
Who hate you
Yeah, you was friend with me
But you hated my friends
(Uh-huh)
 
 
But time passes and people change
Wonderin' if you changed that much, oh
I just want you to be my boyfriend
Yeah, even if we're not dating
I want that we could stay friends forever
I know that we were breaking up a lot
But time passes and people change
 
 
Yeah but 
You'll be like
"Miss me so much, you've been goin' psycho"
Some random secrets with you
That I start to reveal...
To my friends
Was the whole point
That you're even more a good friend
Than my best friends
(Uh-huh)
 
 
Tell me that I'm trash and that you could easily replace me
Tell me that I'm strung out, wasted on the daily
Tell me that you wish that we've never been friends
You hate me because my friends are your enemies
Prolly 'cause there's no way that I can break up with some of your enemies
(No way)
 
So even if we're just friends
Our relation
Might not succeed, ah
'Cause you hated some of my friends
And you're prolly still hating on them
 
Yeah, but there's a way
That we can succeed, yeah, yeah
Just I'll keep my friendship of the persons you hate secret
Finally found how we can succeed, ah
But no, how could we?
So I guess that our relation 
Might not succeed, ah ah
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thats nice

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thx

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i had to remove the cussing my parents dont like it

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someone respond plzzzzzzzz

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why

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hvenki wrote:

garbage, leave the site and never come back

oOp-

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hvenki a écrit :
HoudiniENG wrote:

why

it just is(I didnt even read it tbh)

if u dont read it then how could you assume l*l ROL

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it was ok the tune tho... a little flat!

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IzekeL a écrit :

it was ok the tune tho... a little flat!

A little what?

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ah ok

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any good names for the song? cant find one

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You're a total artist Houdini, the song is truly amazing, everything, the rhythm, the verses, the metrics, the way you expose the entire situation and your feelings, really awesome 😮 I'm sure you will be a successful writer in the future, because you know how to transform your deep feelings into art 😉

I think 'Emil' is a good title 👍

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Lau2k04 a écrit :

You're a total artist Houdini, the song is truly amazing, everything, the rhythm, the verses, the metrics, the way you expose the entire situation and your feelings, really awesome 😮 I'm sure you will be a successful writer in the future, because you know how to transform your deep feelings into art 😉

I think 'Emil' is a good title 👍

thx