wow, the poems are piling up.

messed up

i thought we had something

but it was a lie

your such a fake

do you even know why?

i love you

you dont feel the same

you love one, then the next

you should be full of shame

you don't know love

look it up.

you turned me into a volcano

and im ready to erupt

your lies were like walls

i couldn't see through

im so messed up

thanks to you

blinded by my love

i didn't see the real you

and now that your gone

my life is ascew

your lies were like walls i couldn't see through

ifeel so messed and its all thanks to you.

hmmm

you love one, then the net??

it's alright i liked your other 1 more tough

I"m not sure if that could be considered nice, but it certanily brings up the question of what is love

wait its jsut a typo for next sorry now i see haha

love is a feeling towards others love is what binds people to one another its what connects people etc etc etc etc etc etc etc to busy to post my view haha

its supposed to be next, lol, so many typos. yea, i wrote this a while ago.

well thanx anyway heejo!

Does it really bond people, one person in the poem had love, the other didn't feel the bond

nope, it just totaly screws the lover, and the non lover feels nothing.

I know the feeling

well thats too bad red.

I also know that I have done it to a a couple of people, it made me feel bad that I never realized it. But how am I supposed to react if I don't even like the person

idk, very hard question

your poems are indeed piling up LOL

maybe the non-lover just doesn't feel anything towards the lover :S

I like the more direct style:

You messed me up, you stupid cheating whore!

You've cheated on me thousands of times,

But I just can't take it anymore -

Your walls of lies and all related crimes!

You should be now cringing from your shame,

But you're standing here, as bold as brass,

That makes you fake, and really, really, lame,

You're nothing but a dirty, slutty ... lass.

So I'm leaving you, you awful hag,

To delve in intricacies of chessboard.

And don't you dare say that I'm some hack.

That poem is the bestest in the world!

P.S. Don't take it too seriously, your poem's better then I make it out to be.

you should be a motivational speaker with an attitude like that haha

wow, i like his!!! he totally got it. lol, i was just cleaning it up.

your the edited version