Analysis of Chess.com

Well said. But as is, chess.com is the most resourceful and social chess

gaming network on the web.

I cannot believe you wasted your time thinking about and writing this. 

Some very awkward phrasing and stilted language.  B- , I know you can do better. 

A very nice composition Dragonair, I hope that your instructor gave you a good grade for writing it.

You felt it was important enough to reply to though! Thank you :P

What kind of awkward phrasing? Please let me know, thanks!

Thanks ;)

He did say that it was for a class.

Great.  Now I've become an English teacher?  "There are a wide variety of the strengths of chess.com"   Awkward.  Simpler, more powerful is "There are a wide variety of chess.com strengths".

Combine the next 3 choppy sentences into one.  "This includes......WHERE all players......are welcomed AND there is no limitation....

"Compared to other chess websites that are lesser known and have less crdibility built up" is not a sentence.  It's not that you are a bad writer, quite the contrary, but you just need more practice and hopefully some feedback from someone who understands sentence structure.  It's possible that English is not your native language or that you didn't hear English at home while you were growing up. I don't know, although if that's the case then you're probably doing fine.  Best of luck with your paper; hope you get an A.

Yes she did. Thank you haha :)

good one

How do I delete this forum I posted? 

http://support.chess.com/Tickets/Submit

A shame of yourself ?

I read the original essay, and I think a lot of the people above were too harsh. It was a perfectly decent paper.

The OP could have just edit the first post to make it sound better.

or even better put it in the blog.