It reads like porn. A big, lengthy build-up to some fantasized action.
Disturbing, actually.
Is it too late to change the title to The Trojan Porn?
if this is about porn then you have to be reported
what ever!
Never was more cruel retort than this conceived!
This forum is trash. I just skimmed 3 pages of trash.
This forum is trash. I just skimmed 3 pages of trash.
Yes, Jack I agree that it turned out that way. I hope you liked the story at the start but I wont cry if you didnt.
sucks
the suckiest thread
the suckiest thread
Grow up.
Anyway, I thought the story was fine.
I think this may be one of the great threads of the year!
I know right he said "poop" that's epic lawlzorz!!1
Alas, We come late to the party but once here let Us put Our two cents in. We thoroughly enjoyed your story. We hope you continue to post them and don't let the slack-jawed, knuckle-dragging, inbred troglodytes discourage you from doing so. Unfortunately they, like some irritating rash are just something that has to be endured in this web-site. The Dragon, for his part, salutes you sir and thanks you for the creativity and passion you bring to this forum! >:[
Good story. Don't bother with the haters, they can't do better.
Just like with AA, one word at a time...
If you don't have the mental capability to read it, you honestly have an attention problem.
I once went four days without crapping, and then had to force four days worth of crap out at once. That's how much this irony hurt.
what ?! you never read a novel before ?
what ?! you never read a novel before ?
I have.
And the bitter old troll manages to impress the childish acolyte. My joy is complete.
what ever!