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5. Ng5 doesn't make any sense. Nc3 or 0-0 is better.
7. Why are you moving your knight back and forth, you are wasting a whole lot of time not doing anything. Your 'threat' to double his pawns gives up your bishop and activates his rook by opening the g-file.
You could have tried for a c3-d4 pawn push in the center.
14. You haven't finished your development yet. I think Be3 is needed before you push pawns. Same thing for the next 5 pawn moves. 19. screams be3 also. It aims at the king. finally comes at move 24!
I just recently played this game and was wondering if you all could help me analyse it.