An interesting variation on the Posioned Pawn theme.

The game I'm about to post just finished up a few days ago, and I found it a very enlightening loss with the theme of poisoned pawns, and their consequences on development and time. This is my first shot at any serious analysis, so feedback on my analytical style and process would be great for the future, as well as any comments about how the game was played. My opponent, cosco, who was a gentleman and great to play against, may have something to add to my analysis, I'm not sure, but if he does, I hope he posts it here.

Without further ado:

As i read your toughts, everything is ok, white just play very verrry goood

perhaps  why not for black 23... Rfe8 ?? instead of da queen?