how do I make this pgn viable for chess.com?

[White "xx"] [Black "xxx"] [WhiteElo "1000"] [BlackElo "1036"] [Result "0-1"] [Termination "checkmate"] [Date "2023.01.15"] [Time "11:41:02"] 1. c4 e5 2. e3 d6 3. d4 h5 4. h3 g6 5. b3 c5 6. dxc5 dxc5 7. Bd2 Qh4 8. Qxe5 Be6 9. Qh2 Be5 10. b4 Bh2 11. Qg6 Rxg6 12. g3 Bxg3 13. fxg3 Qxh3 14. Rxf7 Bxf7 15. Rf1 Qc8 16. Bxb7 Qxb7 17. a3 Qe6 18. Bc1 Rh8 19. bxc5 Bg8 20. Rf2 Rxg3 21. Rf1 Qxe3 22. Qe2 Qe4 23. Kd1 Qxe2#

Your score evidently has multiple mistakes.  I thought at first that it was just the old style algebraic with both the starting and ending squares listed. ( for example, 7 Bc1d2 )  I tried simply editing out the double entries, but it still didn't work.

I tried manually entering it on the Analysis board.

Your score says 7 Bd2.  Then it asks the Q to take on e5.  That would be impossible.  If the bishop went to b2 on move 7, then it could take on e5.  But the Queen can't take on e5, since it is still on the d file.

Then it says 9 Qh2.. Again, it must be the bishop moving to h2.

But two moves later, the intrepid queen is off to g6.  How did it get there?

I can't make sense of it.  Maybe you can figure it out.

[White "gamxrbling"]
[Black "ninjaGee26"]
[WhiteElo "1000"]
[BlackElo "1000"]
[Result "1-0"]
[Termination "checkmate"]
[Date ""]
[Time ":24"]
[Mode "Classic"]
[FEN "rnbqkbnr/pppppppp/8/8/8/8/PPPPPPPP/RNBQKBNR w KQkq - 0 1"]
1. g3 b6 2. Bf1g2 Bc8b7 3. Bg2xb7 Nb8a6 4. Bb7xa8 Qd8xa8 5. Ng1f3 Na6b4 6. c3 Nb4d5 7. c4 Nd5b4 8. Qd1b3 a5 9. a3 c5 10. axb4 cxb4 11. Qb3xb4 axb4 12. Ra1xa8

Use the "Insert Game or Diagram" function... click the little chess board icon above the text box, first icon on the left, then follow the instructions.

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