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12. Nxe4 should be interesting.
21. Qb6? I think Rc8 before something like d3 would be better.
23. # nice way to finish.
I would suggest posting a game you lost, against a stronger player.

This is how it appears to me (piffle) - all very obvious with hindsight! and I suggest you take these comments with a large pinch of salt:
7. you set up an exchange, forcing your queen out early.
8. losing tempo, while retreating the queen
9. inadequately defended pawn
10. attack easily countered - not worth making
12. should have blocked with the bishop on black
13. smart move - castle and pin opponent's pawn
14. should have exchanged bishops - avoiding the doubled pawns / opening the a-file.
20. looks like a poor choice for black - leaving rook at risk BUT it does open up the possibility of mate on the back row - if black can get a knight to e4
I thought your play was generally quite good - so what do I know?
hey just wondering if i could get some comments and or tips on how to improve my chess skills..