Chapter 9

Oki I made a petty thread that is probably already a thread

So I read all the way through what you've written so far (took bout 15 mins). You've got a decent writing style, and there are really only two main things I have against it: a) I'm not really a fan of YA romance in the first place so no offence lol and b) I don't really see the need for swearing and profanity in books; it's just off-putting. But you definitely do have what it takes to be a writer.

Al the romance books I’ve seen have swears in them

Oh, ok, that's fine then. Because ALL of the other ones have it it therefore must be ok

Oki

thats only for one person.

I remembered my promise to read the book rn lol

u will have to fit with @Love_Aiger for that name

Thanks :>>

SRU!! <333

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Sley 💅💅💅