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That was one of the worst poems I've ever read!Laughing It was supposed to be right?

trysts
DENVERHIGH wrote:
trysts wrote:

That was one of the worst poems I've ever read! It was supposed to be right?


Hi trysts

You are right. I wrote the poem but in order to post it I added the chess parts.

It originaly was supposed to be without every fifth line.

I am going there now and I will remove them.

Thanks for the input

 


I don't know the purpose in only removing a few lines?  Now it may go to "Off Topic", where less people will have the unique experience of reading it.Laughing

peterbrandt1000
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