I am making a new poem!! but plot twist

Hello! Guys, I have been making a new poem, I have made two stanzas of it How is it?

But guys there is a plot twist, You guys will rate this out of 100 (Note poem will be continued later now it is only 2 stanzas) And on 7 November I will take a average of all Rating you guys gave.

If I Get below 50 percent I will play Egg opening in Bullet until I win with it...

If I get above 50 percent I will do this type of challenge again.

Also guys tell how is the poem!

Sunshower, at Evening O'clock,
Orange twilight as dusk slowly fades.
A Rainbow, nature's Vivid crown,
Regal In the Blue, is so Sublime.

Lightning Strike, Laugh of the Sky,
Saphhire Twilight, As Night descends.
The gentle sigh of nature blows By,
Fills my empty lungs, with Bracing air.

Wish me luck! good day!

I'll also give a 80/100

wow!! 80.0000001/100!! I'm impressed! (not a joke)

Hello buddy! You remind me of Rabindranath Tagore

99/100

good luck

Sunshower falling, at The Evening Hour,
ginger twilight, as dusk lightly surrenders.
A Rainbow, nature's vibrant crown,
Across the sky's canvas, it soars with an artist's grace

A Lightning Strike, the sky's Thundering cackle,
Pale azure Twilight, As Night is approaching soon.
The Gentle breath of nature whispers past,
Fills my empty lungs, with cool arousing air.

Pitch Black Clear Sky as dusk faded away,
Twinkling Bright stars, toying around the sky.
Bright White moon, nature's only night ball,
Shedding a silvery Mystical glow, vast Beyond.

Improved version of my poem

85/100. Nice poems!

Well, there's a lot to improve, but decent start. Do you use poem foots in English. I'm writing poems, but it's very complex with poem foots.

I am not too good at the English poems I make. I am rather good at my language "Hindi" i make English poems that are not much complex and Easy to understand. If any suggestions are here bro please tell so I can improve!

I understand. I also couldn't make poems in English.

999999999999999999/100

At least i don't now have to play egg opening lol

10/100, jk 79/100

Ty !