Japanese speakers needed

Hello all

If you speak Japanese and know Katakana and hiragana, please help me!

I'm writing a song, and I want it to be in Japanese. So far, I've been resorting to Google Translate, and Lord Knows How accurate that is. I think it rhymes so far. I'd like to double-check that, as well as improve the grammar if at all possible. We can chat here and then PM later. 

Specifics:

I am going to be creating an UTAU Japanese VCV (vowel-consonant-vowel) voicebank in the future. I want to release it with an original song to its name! Yes, this is kind of weeb-ish, but I just want to see what the program is like and do covers for my friends when I have time. 

The song doesn't need to be perfect, nor does it have to be exactly the way I have the original lyrics. I just want to make this as good as I can get it. 

I have no friends or relatives who speak the language, so I'm reaching out to the community that has many different peoples from different cultures and language backgrounds. 

Any help WILL BE HEARTILY APPRECIATED!

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