when you fall
there is always an end
but if you fall in your mind
there is no stop
nothing but darkness
this happens to those who don't support themselves
also to those nobody cares about
their friends land safely and people celebrate
but they forget about the one who kept falling
hatred and loneliness surround that person
they are forgotten
they are put down
nobody cares they just fall
with no one to catch them
with no one to care
PEEK-A-BOO
Writch © 6/3/2001
For the third night
I stayed awake
Sighing in bed
unable to sleep
without you, Sis
I stared upward
at the ceiling
to the slow fan
I could not see
but knew was there
I thought of us
before your birth
when Mom held me
and I held you
in her pregnant belly
I’d sing
Peek-a-boo
I know you’re there
I can feel you breathing
My mind drifts later
to when we’re kids
and slept like spoons
after we played
hide-n-go-seek
I’d say
Peek-a-boo
I know you’re there
I can hear you breathing
When we were teens
in the winter
behind a tree
you’d sneak attack
or at least tried
I’d yell
Peek-a-boo
I know you’re there
I can see you breathing
Last week you died
before I came back
a chance for good-bye
the bed bends and
a draft stirs... you?
I whisper
Peek-a-boo
I know you’re there
I can feel you breathing
MY FAV SNACK
cookies......................
milk...........................
delicious.....................
THE END
lulzman11: why u talkin bout my old subject
Wtich: im sry, but that was rly good! not that im suprised, but im sry for ur loss
Thank you, Trish. And actually? There was no loss... it was fictitious.
Never under estimate the power of your (controlled) imagination.
oh....well i go deep into poetry, sometimes deeper than they really are! lots of things i write about are true though, so u know...well thx for commenting! hope i can see more of urs and everyone's work
these r gud so far
these r gud so far
Except for the cookie poem.
Seriously.
At least Marquis made a serious effort - a good one at that.
nu uh...mine was pretty awesome
nope. pretty sure you needed some more awe in your awesome.
a lot more, actually.
ive noticed nobody is putting any writing, thats the point of this forum!!
i have nothing to write about bu tnice poems writch yours i struely remarkable so is marquis's eventhough it's an old subject and ryan you disappoint me what am i gonna do with you
kayla, your poetry is awesome, mine has WAY too much emotion in in, Writch is just releated to Emily Dickinson or something, and marquis, it was an old subject but awesome, and ryan idk what ima do with you either
i can write songs but not poetry
I know theres a group for this, but i wanna see everyone's writing.
He/she is their true self when they can express it on paper alone. You can post Poetry, stories, or chapters from a book u r writing