That is indeed quite the lore dump. Would it be better revealed through exposition, dramatically, through dialogue between your characters as the story progresses?
no way no way tally hall lore dump
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bananana man is hawaii part ii the events of banana man are part of hawaii part ii in the middle of the mind electric its simons mind searching for any grounding to hold onto before the point of no return simon has had relations with banana man takes place during the events of the mind electric after the second chorus but before the bridge