poem lovers please read

Nonsense

Lost among the stars,
Can’t seem to make my way home
Creatures haunt my memories
Every thought I have is ruined by you
Charcoal has run through my veins
Cause people like you turn the purest-
-Of men to demons

just something i came up with while irritated.

nothing too special, not really anything close to my best.

just wanted to share to logical people.

Not bad! Your free verse is better than mine, I can say. 

Here's a poem of mine which I wrote in my spare time. Not that special either, but here goes:

"My life is a void

Filled with litres of emptiness.

Sounds that leave my mouth

return not to my ears.

A mere shadow of the night,

An orphan sitting on the street.

People look not or with eyes of hatred in my spite,

And they trample my heart with their feet.

What small grains of friendship I find

Slip through my fingers like the wind.

Everyone is mean, none are kind.

Am only I so much maligned?

I am afflicted; I have lost all held dear.

I am now deprived, a desert, a drought.

I scream, but none heard me.

Sound fails to thrive in a void."

that one is really well done.

in my opinion at least. :)

Are you a poem fanatic?

it is good, I like it we are all get irritated sometimes.

lol not a fanatic, but i am a 'pro' poet. none have been successfully published yet, as of lack of themes.
thank you  lovely people :)

You welcome.

i love the avatar :) <3

Thanks!