POEM

every day one women.... not too much hard?

sodnomjamts the author only wants to be known as AJC

ciljettu , thank you it is a lovely poem

Redbull we have a hard time in convincing you dont we lol

I was the same as RedBull for my whole life... Until I was 42 and fell in love for the first time. No one was more surprised than I. Then I walked into a WalMart in Whitehorse YT and saw this piece of rinky-dink art that said, "There is only one happiness in life. To love and to be loved." Ordinarily I would have walked right by and maybe not even notice. But I was arrested by it and posed near it for a pic that I sent to my sweet baby...

That is so sweet xtophr1:)

Beautiful words

Thanks Khaled :)

thanks suezy,  you are the author aren`t you?

No I'm not ,I just delivered for the author:)

AJC is the credit at the end of the poem. Beyond that we don't know who it was who wrote the poem, although some internet searching could find something.

it looks version like from Bible?

Does nobody notice the word choice error in the first line?

"Theirs a something we just can't fight"?

Otherwise, it's a well-written poem.

You are correct very observant

I like the poem

thanks!

A nice poem. :-)

Thanks Matt

I've overlooked the errors. But "Theirs" should be "there's" and "Cause' " should be " 'cause". There are other relaxed, trendy selections that are entirely subjective. I would write it differently, as I'm sure you would, so the rest is just nit-picking critique.