TOGOTIAN DISCLAIMER When Are We Going by MintWarrior and HitThePin

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Basically my 1st fan fic if you like this one I might make


WHEN ARE WE GOING
Chapter 1

My name is Horribletomato and I am living a sad life. My parents died in a car accident, or so grandma told me I live with her. I was not the brightest student and when it comes to sports let’s just say I score a lot of points ( for the other team ). Life sucks the only bright side is my best friend Waredude. We have a lot of interests. He loves comic books and so do. I my favorite is Doctor Strange. If I had his ability I would go back to see my parents again. We also like playing in the forest. Sometimes we roleplay as if I am a superhero and he is a villain. Waredude also lost his parents but he never told me how but I also never told him either and we were gonna keep it that way one day when me and Waredude were playing in the forest I fell down and for some reason it was a long drop. Waredude followed me as the true friend he is and we landed we landed in this oval-shaped car. It looked futuristic. We went inside and a computer voice said what date would you like to leave too. At 1st we were confused so jokingly waredude said 1943 Aushwitz Berkanu I remember that this is what we are learning in school about WW2, but then things were spinning. I think there was something purple or something, but than I see some people who are laboring. I gawk from the windows of the machine and they look dead. Then a man with a gun aimlessly fires around speaks German saying something. Waredude says their saying WORK OR DIE THE FATHERLAND DOES NOT FEED THE USELESS. Waredude knows what they are saying because his foster parents are German and taught him German. We thought of laying low but than Waredude says HIDE so we did. They missed us and the machine because a kid was running around they said something to a general and he shot near the kid but missed. The kid went back to work, but the general seemed nervous and scared. We were suspicious about it but we were going to worry about that later. We tried to make a plan on what to do when we remember that there was a Hitler youth group, so we took a 20 min walk to a village and went to the Hitler youth club. waredude did most the talking. Waredude seemed red most the time but I had no idea what was happening and in the end we got the suits and we said our names and hailed Hitler and all that. We never meant it and we knew if we did not we were going to be shot, but now that we are safe, I told Waredude to tell them that we are going to interview one of the generals as a project, and he told them. We then went to the camp. This time we got a ride. Waredude told the general and asked which one and Waredude asked which one. I said we should do the nervous one so they gave us a room and they put us with him. He was petrified, and when Waredude was about to ask his 1st question the general said, "Ich bin Jude,"
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He wrote it. I proofread it.
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You will be buddy you will be
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Ry your in mine as a tiki named Alika if that makes you feel better XD
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HAWAIN King what do you think
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I like it
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Thanks
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When’s the next chapter 

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Hoping to post it on Friday
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IT WILL BE POSTED ON FRIDAY EVERYONE
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Waredude looks at me with wide eyes and tells me he is a Jew.
I tell him to ask the man, “Can he speak English?”
Waredude asks the general. He says he would prefer it so they cannot understand.
Horrible tomato asks, “What is your name”
General: “My name iz Elroch“
Horrible tomato and waredude introduced themselves.
Waredude: “If you’re a Jew, how are you not laboring?“
General: ”I am a very rich businessman and I was in a conference in Reykjavik, Iceland, and when I came back, my family is gone someone tells me about vat happened and I scared see so I go in military disguised and got this far sad thing about life is my own family did not recognize I was the guard for there camp I looked at them my daughter was scared of me and the boy I almost shot that was my son I missed on purpose he did not know who I was I lost all my family
Waredude “ what if we take your family and let you escape “
Ryan “ why you do not turn me in”
Horrible tomato “ of course not “
Waredude “ we meet in front of the hitler youth group at 7:00 pm to plan tomorrow’s escape

What horrible tomato,waredude,and Ryan did not know was the great auk was listening ( he could understand English) I wanna he was hitlers right hand man and a cruel general he did not know who was in there but he knew where to go

They all hailed hitler and left

Waredude “ so how are we going to wait until 7 “

Horrible tomato “ in the machine “

THE MACHINE they both said in panic and ran to the place the machine was luckily it was still there than they just stayed there

Horrible tomato “ what do you think the invisible button does “
Waredude “try it out “
Horrible tomato “ trying out got us here it can’t get any worse”
He pushed the button and it was good it made sure no one can see the machine

So at some point we just randomly say what time it is

Than the same robotic voice said 6:30 pm

Horrible tomato “ we better get ready to leave to the hitler youth camp now “

than the robotic voice says “ going to nearest hitler youth camp “
And it seems all purple again for a second and we are there

We wait there for some time until we see Ryan

Ryan comes and we say our greetings than we try planning his and his family escape
So our plan in the end was that each day we would take one family member at a time to the back of the shed we told Ryan to trust is from there and he was unsure at 1st but he eventually agreed
So we left but than we look around and when we take one step a circle of nazis surround us and in the center is some tall figure creeping toward us with a gun aiming to shoot us at any moment
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Excellent work my friend
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Nice

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Thanks guys
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Oof! I am a bad guy?

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Are you fine with that
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So need an editor for this any takers
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This is coming back in business we will start posting starting from Feb 17th and look out more stories are coming 

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Cool

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Ryan points his gun at the ring leader  and the leader says something even Waredude didn't know. Ryan replied at the same suit than the Nazis circling us put there guns down and the leader and Ryan have a laugh. The leader is wearing a mask we still have no idea who this person is but than a gun is at the back of both of our heads we put our hands up and Ryan walks toward the leader and looks at us menacingly. All goes black

we wake up in a room and a guy stern cold hearted with a gun and many other guards he comforts us ( or tries) and than says " Where iz the machine ". Our eyes wide and we just say "what machine?" but than this man says ZE MACHINE VICH TOOK U HERE THERE ARE NOW 2 IN ZE TIMEE LINE AND DR GLAINDORF WILL NOT BE HAPPY "

"Glandorf isn't that your last name "I ask waredude

Yes but after adoption he replies 

And so we ask this stern eyed man if we can meet this dr.

He says no and now with us at gunpoint asking us "WHERE IZ ZE MACHINEARY ? " with more force.

We say its in Reykjavik 

The general looks satisfied and says "ok but to be safe even if you are telling the truth "

BANG