My credentials: I am roughly a 1500 level blitz player on chess.com, and I play blitz almost exclusively. I love to read about chess, and consider myself fairly educated on the principles behind it. Hopefully I'm not too patzerish too help you out.
Positionally, you seem to have made your dark squared bishop worse and worse throughout the whole game, not that you used it, really. With moves like 10. e5? (I've always heard maintaining the tension, as a rule of thumb is better. Also, this shuts off the h2-b8 diagonal), 13. a3, and most of all 17. f4?? (aside from being positionally inferior, you can win a piece, as I said below), it seemed like you were building a barrier of pawns between the enemy's pieces and your dark squared bishop.
Also, instead of 17. f4, you had a very sweet tactic: 17. Nb3 Qe2 18. Bxh6 wins a piece, I'm pretty sure. 29. f5 would have been the proper exploitation of the pin of the pawn to the queen, as well.
Overall, I think you should practice forming plans, and following them most effeciently and consistently. You do this already, but there are, um...inconsistencies? in your play, I think. Nxg6 was a good spot, by the way.
Hey guys, I'm looking for a bit of constructive criticism on this game that I just played. Anything to do with moves that I should have made or perhaps moves that I should not have. I know that I made a couple of moves that were useless because I changed my mind on what I wanted to do i.e. move 32+33. Did I just win because the other guy made a mistake or otherwise? Just anything really would be helpful. Thanks guys.
I started with a King's Indian Attack as an opener, I'm not sure what it was that the opposition used. I played d4 instead of d3 in the KIA. Looking forward to hearing some feedback.