make a story and I will rate it

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So basically I made this a few months ago so i want to do this again so the rules are

1 there will be a 1st 2cnd and 3rd

1st place will get Diamond membership

2cnd place will get platinum

And third will get gold

I will rate the 0/10
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A story you say?
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How long must it be?
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So for example there was this guy named Harry he lived in Hogwarts etc. and I will rate it this challenge will end in 10 years and don’t make the thing to long
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Well… 10 years is too long😂
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Ok by 3 months 😂
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#6 4/10
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Your fine
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9.9/10 you can also make up one.
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In the beginning, three good friends see war as a right of way to make a man out of themselves. But once they get to the front, they see the true horrors of reality and will warn the world of this- if they survive.
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Yep
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I was never good at lying. That's why I became a secret operative. I figured, if I could lie for a living, maybe I could lie to myself. Maybe I could pretend that I wasn't lonely, that I wasn't scared, that I wasn't who I wanted to be... (The beginning of a short story I had written a long time ago).

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Yep
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Let’s hope this one dies
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Day and night, are opposites by comparison. The day has its sun, its heat, and its climate. The night has its moon, its fresh breeze, and crisp air. When I was younger I had been deathly afraid of the dark. Why? I'm not sure. Most young children would probably tell you a monster was in their closet. Yet, as I grew older, the fear of the dark seemed silly. But now..., it seems stupid not to be afraid of the dark.

The memories of my childhood are nonexistent. A void within myself. Quite scary, isn't it? Could you imagine waking up one day and not knowing who you are or where you are? The only thing within your beating heart is the feeling of fear. Like an evil snake, it wraps itself around you, constricting your lungs and drowning your thoughts. Like a wildfire, it burns through your mind, destroying solitude and breaking your will. Oh, how strong fear is. It creeps silently upon every single one of us, waiting for us to stumble in the dark.